R&P: Short lyrics/Poem?

It's been a very long time since I really did any poetry, or wrote a song so please bear with me. I also apologize if the format is just confusing, but it actually flows better when I sing this, which I thought I would be able to share with you. I did this on acoustic at open night yesterday but it was deleted by mistake. Whatever though, I hope you like it.

For my friend,

Katy Lazar

1990-2008

Please tell me my dear

Before I shed another tear

How could you leave me? Was it really that easy?

I gave you my all, yet I see it was not enough

Tell me what happened; Was life really too tough?

You grabbed me by the heart

And you crushed me like a bitter tart

The pressure feels like I'm going down under

My life is in despair; Everything is a plunder;

The pieces can't be repaired

I gave you my all, yet I see it was not enough

What happened to you? Was life just too tough?

I hate you, yet I love you

My love has never been so strong for you

Hello there my dear

Tell me how are you now? Why do I ask...

Your on the other side now

If I reached out for the light

Would I see your face tonight?

Where are you my dear

We are all shedding tears

Come back to us I beg you;

Would you come back for me

So here is to you my friend

We gather in this den

Our glasses raised to you

We love you, I love you

The Fairest one of all

Who will hold my hand; When I'm fixated in a jam?

If I could ask you, would you tell me what to do?

Did I do something wrong? Or did you feel like you don't belong

If I could go back, would I have been able to fix it?

The questions have me crazy

I feel all to hazy

I gave you my all, yet I see it was not enough

You have to tell me, was life just too tough?

I raise my glass to you; Gazed upon your portrait

Here is to you my friend

My one and my only...

Update:

Thanks FAFF

Update 2:

Thank you Blah

Update 3:

Appreciate it Justice =)

Update 4:

Means a lot Great Gigs...just know everyone that this is all one poem/song.

Update 5:

Thanks a lot Zach. But... it cheered you up? =( ...this poem is about my friend who committed suicide. Sorry man but "cheered me up" was not what I was going for. You had me at sad man =\

Update 6:

I see Zach. Glad I could help.

Update 7:

Hey Jelo. This is a poem that I turned into a song. So the answer is yes

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Those lyrics are so meaningful and expressive..very moving.

    They must be really powerful when you sing them. Just reading them makes me get teary eyed.

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  • 4 years ago

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    That was really good. I liked it a lot. I'm sorry about your friend though...overall it's a great song/poem. Peace.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    hey death

    dang dude, its really good, its sad; i liked it

    cheered me up, im stressed as hell so reading that gave me a little break from thinking about this stuff. even if it only took like a minute lol.

    Source(s): EDIT: sorry, not cheery like happy but it gave me something to look at besides my miserable surroundings and math books.
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  • 1 decade ago

    dude i love you...

    you just explained everything i feel about _her_.......

    i love this poem...Have you made it into a song yet??

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  • 1 decade ago

    the on e i have its private..if you really want me to write it for you..you can ask me cuz i write poem tooo..

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Man

    one word for you

    EPIC!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Hey Death.

    I really like it, dude. :]

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    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    They're really awesome! =]

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  • 1 decade ago

    awww its really good

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