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This book is about Benny,he always thoughtthat he is the best and best at everything.He needed to go to camp and he thinks that he could handle anything.But he could not pact up his bag himself.He thought he was also the best camper.He and others camper arrived the campsite and played somethings.Benny do not listened to the instructor and went on the sail boat.He tipped over th boat.They went to the wood shop and built birdhouses.He needed to stick the wood but he made his hand sticky by glue.He went fishing but he only get a old boot.He playeds tennis but he lost all the tennis balls.He is sad because he is not the best camper.At last They went hiking and straied. Benny helped them to go out the forest and he was th best camper!

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    This book is about Benny,he always [thought that] he [was] the best and [good] at everything.He needed to go to camp and he [thought] that he could handle anything.But he could not [pack] up his bag himself.He thought he was also the best camper.He and others camper arrived the campsite and played somethings.Benny [did] not [listen] to the instructor and went on the sail boat.He tipped over th boat.They went to the wood shop and built birdhouses.He needed to stick the wood but he made his hand sticky by glue.He went fishing but he only get a old boot.He playeds tennis but he lost all the tennis balls.He is sad because he is not the best camper.At last They went hiking and straied. Benny helped them to go out the forest and he was th best camper!

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