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我最喜歡的節日

一年的年尾,我總會閉著我的眼睛回想一年發生的史事,從一月到那天,來增添幾分樂趣。

是的,那天就是聖誕節!我喜歡的節日,他有很多由來,更有很多有趣的傳統故事,各國的慶祝習俗也都不一樣。

我認為最有趣的慶祝方式就是在德國。

聽說在聖誕節的前四個星期天分別為"待降節"而當第一個待降節到來時,德國人會點起窗前"待降花園"的第一根蠟燭

再來依序照個日期點燃其他蠟燭,當第四根蠟燭被點燃時,代表聖誕節要來臨了!在這段期間德國的小朋友會得到一份"耶誕日曆"他是一個紙盒,上面會有1到24個小「門」,每個小門後面都有一樣小玩具或糖果之類的東西。就像「抽」東西一樣,小朋友從十二月一號開始每天可以開一個門,剛好開到十二月二十四的耶誕節前夕。

這樣是不是很有趣呢? 

如果大家也這麼浪漫的度過,會不會變的更期待明天的到來呢?

這是我要翻成英文的短篇文章

我自己文法很爛,不過我還是盡力的打了出來

不過我想都不太對 煩請大大教導我如何修改!

my favorite festival

A year of bottom,I always close my eyes to recall what thing happen in this year from January to December,that can increase some joys.

Yes,that date is Christmas! It have so much history and more interest traditions story,every country's conventions are different.

I tought the most intreseting way to celebrate Chrstmas was in Germany.

Reputedly,the Christmas in Germany's last month had four sunday.

There are "advent"and while the first advet coming,the people will enkindle the first candle of adventskranz and so on

when the forth candle enkindled to mean the Chirstmas is coming soon

In period of these days, the children will get a adventskalender,this is a box of paper

and had 24 small doors,and behind the per door,had a small toy or a candy.

just like to pump things,can let children open one door everyday

and it over on December 24th,the date is the eve.

That was funny,right?

If everyone also lives so funny,it will exciting about tomorrow?

Update:

很謝謝芒果 不過有些我認為怪怪的

像是"eyes that I always close me recall the historical event that happen in one year"真的有這樣用的嗎- -

我想沒有這種 close me的文法吧

只能說就算有 我也不可能會用這麼高階的- -

而且我" "裡面的advent並不是用單字搜尋的。

他是我找資料的時候 資料上寫的- -

你居然把它給改了- -

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  • JACK
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    ◎ My favorite festival

    【個人並不直接對你的翻譯,進行修正;而是再額外再翻譯出一篇,敬請參考&比較,謝謝!】

    【1】At the end of each year, I am used to close my eyes, thinking about what has taken place in the past whole year, and by doing so can it add some joy to my life. As you may already know that my favorite holiday is Christmas Day. This holiday has plenty of origins and fascinating traditional stories, with different customs in each country. And the most interesting celebration I know shows in Germany

    【2】In German, it is said that the four Sundays before Christmas Day are called “Advent”(from the Latin word adventus, meaning "coming", which is a season of the Christian church, the period of expectant waiting and preparation for the celebration of the Nativity of Jesus; in other words, the period immediately before Christmas.)While the first “Advent” is coming, the Germans will light up the first candle of “Adventskranz,” which means“Advent wreath.”

    【3】According to the dates, the other candles will be lit up one by one. And when the fourth one is lit up, it means that Christmas Day is near. During this period the German children will get a “liturgical calendar,” which looks like a paper box with small “doors” numbered from 1 to 24. Behind each door are some common things, such as toys or candies. Just like “drawing something out”, children can open one door from December 1 to Christmas Eve on December 24. Don’t you think it’s somewhat entertaining?

    【4】We will be more likely to look forward to the coming of tomorrow, if we all can spend our Christmas in such a German way, right?

    Source(s): JACK & Wikipedia
  • 1 decade ago

    哈摟!!

    很高興為你解答

    At the end of the year of one year of my favorite festival, eyes that I always close me recall the historical event that happen in one year, from January to, add some enjoyment.

    Yes, that day was Christmas Day!In festival that I like, he has a lot of origins, there are many interesting traditional stories even more, the celebration customs of various countries are different too.

    I think the most interesting celebration way is in Germany. It is said that parts for " waiting to lower one " when wait to lower one first to come four weeks days before Christmas Day, Germen will window first candle that " is it lower garden to wait " come in order taking pieces of date light other candle from the some, when the fourth candle is lighted, represent Christmas Day will come

    Child of Germany during this section will get one " Christmas calendar " he is a paper carton, have 1 to 24 light ' door ', have light toy or candy thing equally behind the each small door above.Like ' smoke ' the things, child can turn on one door every day since December 1, is it go on till on Christmas Day eve on the 24th of December to it so happened.

    Is it so very interesting? If everybody is so romantic spent, do the ones that will change look forward to tomorrow even more?

    希望對你有幫助!!

    Source(s): ME
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