請英文達人幫我修正一下這三句中翻英~謝謝

Question

很多時候我們忘記了上帝的存在，甚至會抱怨祂為什麼離棄了我們。可是上帝選擇用一種特別的方式陪伴， 祂會靜靜地守候在身旁，等哭夠了， 祂將我們緊緊地抱在懷中!

We usually forget God's existence even complain why He abandon us.

In fact, He choose a special way which is with us quietly to company us. When we cry enough, He will hug us in His bosom.

Answer 1

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We usually overlook God's existence and even complain why he had

to abandon us.

In fact, he is always with us in a special way quietly.

When we've cried enough, he will show up and hold us in his mighty

arms.

Note: he had to ( simple past tense)<------

I guess " overlook" is a better word here.<-------

You should connect those two sentences with the conjunction" the".<------

Hope that helps.

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2009-01-18 22:05:45 補充：

You should connect those two sentences with the conjunction" and".<------

2009-01-18 22:06:37 補充：

I mistyped the last word in the sentence above. I am so sorry about that.

Answer 2

We usually forget God's existence even complain why He abandon us.

我們通常忘記上帝的存在甚至抱怨他為什麼放棄我們

In fact, He choose a special way which is with us quietly to company us.

事實上，他選擇安靜地，對公司和我們在一起我們的一個特別的方法。

When we cry enough, He will hug us in His bosom.

當我們哭充足的時候，他將在他的胸部擁抱我們。

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