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JESSIE asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文高手幫忙我糾正英文文法,謝謝

最近在練習看報紙China post學寫政治新聞,請各位英文高手幫

忙糾正我的英文文法,感激不盡。

美國貿易代表署(USTR)將台灣自年度特別301「一般觀察名

單(Watch List)」除名。經濟部長尹啟銘下午表示,台灣老早

就該被除名;這代表台灣已進入創新帶動經濟發展的階段。

“Taiwan has removed from the annually special 301 watch list.”

said The United State Trade Representative (USTR). The Minister of

Economic Affairs Chii-ming said,“Taiwan should be removed

before, and it represents Taiwan has entered into a new stage of

economic development.

在阿富汗首都喀布爾,塔利班恐怖組織在德國大使館外發動炸

彈襲擊,造成至少2名平民死亡,20多人受傷,包括5名美軍。

In the capital of Kabul in Afghan , the Taliban terrorists organization la

unched a bomb attack outside the Germany embassy, killing at least tw

o civilians and resulting in more than twenty people injured, including

of five the U.S. soldiers.

內地律師打算追討圓明園國家級寶物

The Mainland lawyers intend to recover the treasures of

Yuanmingyuan.

美國司法部表示,揚言將在1月20日美國總統就職典禮上暗殺歐

巴馬的一名男子,今天在密西西比州布魯克海文(Brookhave

n)落網。

“the man who claims to assassinate the president-elect Barack Obam

a in the inauguration on January 20 was arrested in Mississippi Brookh

aven today.” The U.S. department of Justice said.

美國政府官員承認銀行危機遠較預期為大,已展開第二波救市

的預備工作,擬購買銀行的壞資產。

The U.S. government officials admitted the banking crisis are more

serious than expected, and they have already prepared to take the

second action to rescue the financial market by buying the unhealthy

assets of banks.

Update:

可以將每一個句子的文法都看一下嗎?

因為這樣我才知道其他句子是否正確

謝謝你。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1.Taiwan has "been" removed from the annually special 301watch list

    2.In the capital of Kabul in Afghan , the Taliban terrorists organization launched a bomb attack outside the Germany embassy, killing at least two civilians and resulting in more than twenty people injured, including "five of the U.S. soldiers".或是寫成"five U.S. soldiers".比較簡潔

    Source(s): me
  • 1 decade ago

    "Taiwan has removed from the annually special 301 watch list.”

    said The United State Trade Representative (USTR).

    個人覺得這句其實可以直接用主動的形式:

    The United State Trade Representative removed Taiwan from its Special

    301 Watch List.

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