祖兒 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文高手幫我修改這句英文? 謝謝

讓我們一起來創造屬於我們的未來。

Let's create the future that belongs to us together.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    讓我們一起來創造屬於我們的未來。

    Let's build our future together.

    解釋 :

    1. 動詞要用 "build" 比較好。

    2. "our"就有"屬於我們"的意思,如果要照中文原意每個字都翻出來,"belongs to us"就會變成累贅字。

    Source(s): me
  • 1 decade ago

    004 的答案很好噢 ^^

  • 1 decade ago

    Let's make a futural solution for us!

    2009-01-04 05:07:07 補充:

    oopps, please change from futual to"future"

  • 1 decade ago

    我覺得你翻的很好ㄚ

    Let's create our futures together.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    改一下 together 的位置, 唸起來比較順口喔..

    "Let's create the future together that belongs to us."

  • 1 decade ago

    Let 's create the future together that belongs to us.

    (不是很好的答案----僅供參考)

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