有誰可以幫我改改這篇文章

我覺得我寫的文章怪怪的,但我又不知道該從何改起。這是學校的外國老師派的作業,他要我們到街上用英文跟外面商店店員或任何人對話,然後寫出經過、心得。

Update:

I went to the movie theatre with my mom this Wednesday night, we were going to see the movie, The Day The Earth Stood Still. Before I went to buy the tickets, I hesitate for a while, and then I pluck up my courage to buy the tickets in English.

Update 2:

At first I said, ‘I wanna buy two tickets of The Day The Earth Stood Still for 7:30 p.m.’ And the clerk just stunned and return to normal immediately. But she then just still look at me in her doubtful eyes.

Update 3:

And I just felt so embarrassed and don’t know what to say. I think this is one of the most embarrassing moment I ever had. But it’s kind of a fun to speak English in Taiwan with the Taiwanese, but not foreigners.

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    I went to the movie with my mother this Wednesday night, we were going to see the movie called The Day The Earth Stood Still. I hesitated for a while before I was going to buy the tickets, and I plucked up my courage to buy the tickets in english.

    At first i said, " I wanna buy two tickets for The Day The Earth Stood Still at 7:30 p.m." The ticket sales lady looked me surprised, and immediately return to normal, but I can still see her wonder eyed.

    I just feel embarrased and don't know how to react. I think this is one of the embarrased moment I ever had, but I think this is really interesting to speak english in Taiwan to communicate with Taiwanese poeple, specially not foreigners.

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