阿哲
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阿哲 asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

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If I were a celebrity or superstar, I would become a singer whose named is ayumi hamasaki who is the most famous and popular singer in Asia.The reason why I fascinate her that are her beautiful voice and graceful movement.

If I were a famous singer,my life would totally be different from ordinary people.I can do anything what I want,but most of important of all ,being celebritise should use themselves attraction to influence everyone on helping those people who really need our helps indeed.First I'm going to hold several concerts and the money of tickets will all be donated.Second,Iwant to endow ten million dollars to build a house which can adopt orphans.Eventually,I am going to hold classes to teach people how to sing beautiful songs.

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Ben 大大 請問一下 To do so是什麼意思?

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  • Ben
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    1 decade ago
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    If I had a chance to become a celebrity or superstar, I would like to be a Japanese Pop singer ---Ayumi Hamasaki, who is the most famous and popular singer in Asia.The reason why I fascinate her is her beautiful voice and graceful movement.

    If I were a famous singer,my life would totally be different from ordinary people.I can do anything I want,but most important of all ,being celebrity should use his/her attraction to influence everyone on helping those people who really need help.To do so, I'm going to hold several concerts first and the ticket income will all be donated to the charities. Second,Iwant to endorse ten million dollars to build a shelter which can bring orphans a refuge.Eventually,I am going to implement a program to teach people how to sing beautiful songs.

    A celebrity or a superstar will not only care about fame or money, but contribute his/her best to the society. Nothing is more happier and satisfied to see the smiles on children's face.

    Source(s): myself
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