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請各位大大看看小弟的文章 中級寫作:你曾經夢想成為一位大明星嗎?請寫120個單字的英文寫作 If I were a celebrity or superstar, I would become a singer whose named is ayumi hamasaki who is the most famous and popular singer in Asia.The reason why I fascinate her that are her beautiful voice and graceful movement. If I were a famous singer,my life would... show more 請各位大大看看小弟的文章
中級寫作:你曾經夢想成為一位大明星嗎?請寫120個單字的英文寫作
If I were a celebrity or superstar, I would become a singer whose named is ayumi hamasaki who is the most famous and popular singer in Asia.The reason why I fascinate her that are her beautiful voice and graceful movement.
If I were a famous singer,my life would totally be different from ordinary people.I can do anything what I want,but most of important of all ,being celebritise should use themselves attraction to influence everyone on helping those people who really need our helps indeed.First I'm going to hold several concerts and the money of tickets will all be donated.Second,Iwant to endow ten million dollars to build a house which can adopt orphans.Eventually,I am going to hold classes to teach people how to sing beautiful songs.
Update: Ben 大大 請問一下 To do so是什麼意思?
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