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Erik enjoy many types of sports. He is liking team sport such as basketball, soccer, and baseball. He also plays traditionals, individual sports like raquetball ad golf his favorite soprts involve danger as well as exciting. He loves extreme skiing, and skydiving.

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Doctors and dieters agree that is possible to lose weight by dieting. The difficulty part, they report, is keeping the weight of after you to lose it.

Research indicates that many people successfully lose weight at some point in life, but most people gain the weight back within three years. Ian Fenn is a doctor who specializes weight problems. He says that there is many sorts of diets, and medical science is working to figure out how to control body weight. "It is also a matter", he says, "of getting people to change their lifestyles. Each person need to find the right combination of diet and exercise."

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    Erik enjoys many types of sports. He likes team sports such as basketball, soccer, and baseball. He also plays traditional, individual sports like raquet ball and golf. His favorite soprts involve danger as well as excitement. He loves extreme skiing, and skydiving.

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    Doctors and dieters agree that it is possible to lose weight by dieting. The difficult part, they report, is keeping the weight off after you to lose it.

    Researches indicate that many people successfully lose weight at some point in life, but most people gain the weight back within three years. Ian Fenn is a doctor who specializes in weight problems. He says that there are many sorts of diets, and medical scientists are working to figure out how to control body weight. "It is also a matter," he says, "of getting people to change their lifestyles. Each person needs to find the right combination of diet and exercise."

    2009-01-01 21:59:53 補充:

    第二段的第二句後半段應該改為如下 --

    Doctors and dieters agree that it is possible to lose weight by dieting. The difficult part, they report, is keeping the weight off after you lose it.

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