The warmest and best weather city in Taiwan must be Taichung city. I have been lived in Taichung for twenty years, and I must be the person known every thing here.
I love this city not only because of the good weather and friendly people but also the delicious snacks and cultural streets. The first thing is the bubble tea, the most popular drinks in Taiwan, which is made by milk and black tea plus pearls. The bubble tea taste sweet, chewing, and you can eat with some sun cookies. You will enjoy it very much.
Another thing is the Fongjia night market which is one of the top three night markets in Taiwan, and there are also a lot of delicious snacks. The place is so popular for young people and people can buy much cheap fashion stuff, and even you can practice your bargaining skill. At night if you do not want to a noisy place, you just go to the Taiwan arts museum which is quite good for mates and the quiet green nature place must make people feel comfortable. I wonder Taichung is really a fun city with great meals.
Any way Taichung is always spring and comfortable if you want to enjoy the two kinds of bustling and quiet, you can come to Taichung which might be the best easy travel in Taiwan.
- Ng JackieLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
Taichung is the city with remarkably warm and good weather in Taiwan . I have been living  in Taichung for twenty years, so I am very familiar with everything around there. 
I love this city not only because of its  good weather and friendly people but also its  delicious snacks and cultural heritage [w]. The first thing is the bubble tea, the most popular drink [w] in Taiwan, which is made with [w] milk, black tea and  tapioca pearls . The bubble tea tastes [w] sweet and the tapioca pearls are chewy [s]. It can be served [s] with some cookies . You will enjoy it very much.
Another thing is the Fongjia's [w] night market which is one of the top three night markets in Taiwan. You can find a lot of delicious snacks here. [s] The place is so popular among [w] young people and people can buy a lot of [w] cheap fashion stuff, and you can even [s] practice your bargaining skill. At night, if you do not want to go to [s] a noisy place, you can [s] just go to the Taiwan arts museum which is quite suitable [w] for mates. This [s] quiet green natural [w] place will  make people feel comfortable. It amazes me that [s] Taichung is really a fun city with delicious food [w].
In conclusion, [w] Taichung is always in [s] spring and comfortable. If [s] you want to experience the mixture of a bustling city and a quiet city [s], you can come to Taichung as it is well worth a visit [s] in Taiwan.
1) weather 是名詞，不能與另一個名詞疊放在一塊作形容詞修飾它，因此調整句型，同時讓句子構造簡練一些。人們無法預測哪裡的氣候最好，所以改用 remarkably 替代
2)這裡使用 lived 表示被動，意思層面有誤
5) 寫作時應使用恰當或正式的詞語及言語，這裡 plus 不適合取代 and
6) pearl 是不能食用的珍珠；tapioca pearl 則是能食用的珍珠般圓粉
2008-12-20 16:06:55 補充：
還有，把 The place is so popular... 改成 It is very popular...
你原文的第一段的第一句同樣也是濫用情態動詞，不應該寫 must be，用 is就行了，不過由於句子還有其他語病，於是我便把句型給改了。
2008-12-23 11:53:08 補充：
Taichung is one of the cities with...Source(s): 自己
- 恐龍Lv 61 decade ago
我建議把第一句的 the city 改成 a city，因為 the 是定冠詞，有指定的意思。如果用 the city 的話，好像就變成台灣只有台中才是這樣的城市。我想應該不只台中才有好天氣吧 ^o^