秉佑 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

一篇英文作文 請幫我看看有沒有什麼需要修改的地方

一篇英文作文 請幫我看看有沒有什麼需要修改的地方

最好是能夠幫我多加點內容 感激不盡 : )

I like English for three reasons. The most important one is that I like

to chat with foreigners very much. When I was in junior high, a

foreigner asked me for direction. It was my first time talked to

foreigner. I was speechless and very embarrassing. But that I really

liked the way they talked. There were humor and passionate and seem

always so energetic that made you very happy when you talked to

them every time. Their body language makes me feel funny. Second,

I love English songs, especially the old ones. Their lyrics are more

significant than the popular songs. And there are many different

stories behind each of them. Third, I want to travel all over the world

and, the most common language in the world is English, so learning

English is the most basic thing I have to do or it will not be

accomplished . We can also get a lot of international information

through English. And the information is really important in the latter

society.

When I was in senior high. My English was better than

other subjects, it made me so arrogant that I thought I was better than

everyone else. But when I entered into university, I had discovered

that I was poor at speaking and listening. I must to strengthen

speaking and listening. For the most important reason, English is my

favorite subject.

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    I like studying English for three reasons. The most important one is that I can communicate like to chat with foreigners as well very much. Because when I was a in junior high school student, one day a foreigner asked me about for direction. It was my first time to talked with to foreigner. I was speechless and very embarrassed. After But that I really liked the way they talked. There were humor and passionate and seem always so energetic to make that made you feel very happy when you talked to with them every time. Their body language makes me feel funny. Second, I love English songs, especially the old songs ones. Their lyrics are more significant than the popular songs. And there are many different stories behind each of songs them. Third, I would want to travel all over the world and, English is a worldwide the most common language in the world is English, so learning English is a the most basic thing I have to do or it will not be accomplished . We also can get a lot of international information through English. And the information is really important in the latter society. When I was a in senior high school student. My English's score was better than other subjects, it made me so arrogant that I thought I was better than the others everyone else. But when I entered into the university,(Now I am a university student) I found out had discovered that I am not good was poor at speaking and listening. I must have to improve my strengthen speaking and listening. For the most important reason, whatever English is my favorite subject.

    我參照你的原意, 沒有改很多, 你寫的相當不錯, 只是一些小細節需要補強而以. eg: When I was in senior high. 你並沒有說出你是一個國中學生. 你可能是老師或在那裡工作.

    藍色的字最好刪除

    橘色字是要加進去的

    改的不是很好, 提供參考!!

    I hope the sounds is more better for your reader.

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