laye asked in 藝術與人文詩詞與文學 · 1 decade ago

段落英文翻譯後的句子...煩請指正改錯謝謝

原文:

有一天,赫拉克勒斯為尋找金蘋果來到這裏。他看到惡鷹在啄食可憐的普羅米修士的肝臟,便把那只殘忍的惡鷹從這位苦難者的肝臟旁一箭射落。然後他鬆開鎖鏈,解放了普羅米修士。

赫拉克勒斯把半人半馬的肯陶洛斯族的喀戎作為替身留在懸崖上。喀戎雖然可以要求永生,但為了解救普羅米修士,他甘願獻出自己的生命。

但是普羅米修士必須永遠戴一隻鐵環,環上鑲上一塊高加索山上的石子。這樣,宙斯可以自豪地宣稱,他的仇敵仍然被鎖在高加索山的懸崖上。

自己翻譯:

One day,Hercules came here to look for the golden apple.He saw the vulture eating Prometheus's liver.Then he killed the cruel vulture beside Prometheus's liver by an arrow.And Hercules take the chain to untie him,he let Prometheus free.

Hercules taked substitute-Chiron,a centaur from Kentauros to stay on a crag to satisfy Zeus's conditions.Although Chiron can ask to needs deathless,he paid his life with content for help Prometheus.

But Prometheus must wear an iron hoop with a rock from Caucasus Mountains forever.Therefore,Zeus can be proud of his enemt still locking on the Caucasus Mountains' crag.

有些是字典上查的,所以文法有些可能會不通順

如有文法上或單字/詞的錯誤懇請指正 謝謝

Update:

不接受直接用翻譯器的解答...很抱歉..(這個翻譯我用過了)

我希望我不只是完成報告..也能看到自己的錯誤..

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  • 1 decade ago
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    One day, Hercules came here to look for the golden apple. He saw the vulture eating Prometheus's liver. So he killed the cruel vulture beside Prometheus's liver by an arrow. Then Hercules took the chain to untie him, he let Prometheus free.

    Hercules took substitute-Chiron, a centaur from Kentauros to stay on a crag to satisfy Zeus's conditions. Although Chiron can ask to be immortal, but he paid his life with content to help Prometheus.

    But Prometheus must wear an iron hoop with a rock from Caucasus Mountains forever. Therefore, Zeus can be proud of his enemy still locking on the Caucasus Mountains' crag.

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  • 6 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    One day's, Hercules to seek for the golden apple to arrive at here. He saw the wicked hawk in the calligraphy stroke food pitiful proletariat rice member's liver, then an arrow shoots that only cruel wicked hawk from nearby this misery's liver falls. Then he loosens the catena, liberated the proletariat rice member.

    Hercules is willing ceramic Lowes race's ka Rung to remain half-and-a-half people of horses as the substitute person on the cliff. Although ka Rung may request the eternal life, but to rescue the proletariat rice member, he is willing to sacrifice his life.

    But the proletariat rice member must forever wear an iron hoop, on the link adds a border together in Mt. Gaojiasuo's gravel. Thus, Zeus may proudly declare that his foe was still locked on Mt. Gaojiasuo's cliff.

    2008-12-12 21:00:34 補充:

    上面的少寫一段..

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  • 1 decade ago

    Original text: One day's, Hercules to seek for the golden apple to arrive at here. He saw the wicked hawk in the calligraphy stroke food pitiful proletariat rice member's liver, then an arrow shoots that only cruel wicked hawk from nearby this misery's liver falls. Then he loosens the catena, liberated the proletariat rice member.

    Hercules is willing ceramic Lowes race's ka Rung to remain half-and-a-half people of horses as the substitute person on the cliff. Although ka Rung may request the eternal life, but to rescue the proletariat rice member, he is willing to sacrifice his life.

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