天才 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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(我英文不是很好~麻煩各位指教!)

Do people be qualified to criticize other people who don't cater to others'character?I think the answer is absolutely "NO".Why do I say that ? Mankind has been developing different individuality because of the environment~family~friends~or anything else.Due to these differences,our world has been becoming colorful and fabulous!

Howevre,it's obvious that not everyone agree with this situation in the same way.

I was criticized by a classmate who I thought him as a good friend yesterday.I didn't know this sorrowful fact until my senior told me this cruel news.I was a bit angry.Particularly I viewd him as one of my good friends!Why did he speak ill of me and kept me in the dark?I pretended I didn't be influenced by his impolite comment.

Sad as I was,I kept telling myself I was not that kind of person .Did I unconsciously express this feeling on my face?(or I need to do plastic surgery?wow~It's pretty cool,isn't it?)I swore I didn't mean to act like an artificial person.But did a person ,who speak ill behind my back,pretending that we "are" still good friend ,and it couldn't be called a real artificial person?

Update:

我想real我少打一個 ly......

也請說一下整體寫作技巧狀況

痾....總分20好了!

(可以很以很一點沒關係,但不要為了耍狠......請憑良心說!)

Update 2:

Roger:你寫的好.....................專業..

不過您誤會我的意思了~幾乎看起來像是另依篇文章= =

我沒有要他到在全班道歉這種地步,你好像把我想寫的主要內容完全的換掉= =

不過有很多地方直得我學習,謝謝!

fernyeo04:您比較接近我的意思!不過~還是不太.............

可以只換湯不換藥嗎?(就是修的美一點..但不是全部改掉!)

我都哭了(哈哈)~我寫的好糟!大家都大修改= =

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Are people qualified to criticize others who have got different personalities from himself? I think the answer is absolutely "NO".

    Why? Mankinds have been developing different personalities because of different environments, families, friends, or anything else. Due to these differences, the world we're living in has become colorful and fabulous! Howevre, it's obvious that not everyone agrees with belief.

    I was criticized by a classmate yesterday whom I thought to be a good friend of mine. I didn't know this sorrowful fact until my senior told me this cruel news that I was a bit angry. Particularly I regarded him as one of my good friends! Why did he speak ill of me and kept me in the dark? I pretended I wasn't effected by his impolite comments.

    Sadly I kept telling myself that I'm not that kind of person. Did I unconsciously show this sadness in my face? (or I need to do plastic surgery? Wow~ It must be pretty cool, mustn't it?) I swear I didn't mean to pretend myself. But couldn't a person, who spoke ill behind my back and pretending we "are" still good friends, be called a real hypocritical person?

    以上是我幫你稍微修改一下, 你的句點後要空出一格出來歐....

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    1 decade ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    Do people be qualified to criticize other people who don't cater to others'character?I think the answer is absolutely "NO".Why do I say that ? Mankind has been developing different individuality because of the environment~family~friends~or anything else.Due to these differences,our world has been becoming colorful and fabulous!

    ARE PEOPLE QUALIFIED TO CRITICIZE OTHERS WHO DO NOT AGREE /SEE EYE TO EYE / WITH DIFFERENT VIEWS FROM THEM ?MY ANSWER IS AN ABSOLUTE "NO". WHY DO I SAY THAT?

    PEOPLE ARE OF DIFFERENT CHARACTERS DUE TO FACTORS SUCH AS THE ENVIRONMENT, FAMILY, FRIENDS, AMONG OTHERS. THAT IS WHY THE WORLD IS SO DIVERSE AND COLOURFUL DUE TO THESE DIFFERENCES.

    Howevre,it's obvious that not everyone agree with this situation in the same way.

    I was criticized by a classmate who I thought him as a good friend yesterday.I didn't know this sorrowful fact until my senior told me this cruel news.I was a bit angry.Particularly I viewd him as one of my good friends!Why did he speak ill of me and kept me in the dark?I pretended I didn't be influenced by his impolite comment.

    HOWEVER, NOT EVERYONE MAY SEE IT THIS WAY. I WAS RECENTLY TOLD BY MY SENIOR THAT ONE OF MY FRIENDS HAD SPOKEN ILL BEHIND MY BACK. I WAS VERY MUCH UPSET BY HIS ACT AS I HAD REGARDED HIM AS ONE OF MY GOOD FRIENDS.

    I FEIGNED IGNORANCE OF THIS MATTER AND CONTINUED TO BE ON GOOD TERMS WITH HIM. DID I CONSCIOUSLY PORTRAY SUCH AN IMAGE? I SWEAR I DID NOT WANT TO DO SO.

    DOES THIS MAKE ME A HYPOCRITE TOO LIKE MY FRIEND?

    Sad as I was,I kept telling myself I was not that kind of person .Did I unconsciously express this feeling on my face?(or I need to do plastic surgery?wow~It's pretty cool,isn't it?)I swore I didn't mean to act like an artificial person.But did a person ,who speak ill behind my back,pretending that we "are" still good friend ,and it couldn't be called a real artificial person?

    2008-12-12 01:16:29 補充:

    You are able to express what you want to say and after the first read, I was able to understand your passage.

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  • RY
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Is anyone qualified to criticize other people who gets not very well along with each other due to the different personalities?

    I think my answer is absolutely "NO". And, why I said that ?

    You know that our world has a lot full of colorful lives and interesting things happened all over places on the earth. Different bloods, unequal races and thoughts, and an unique lifestyle each in a specific society. Generally, they interact among them to form as our human being. Naturally, people are disputing quite often over their different point of view.

    I was seriously criticized by a classmate yesterday, once he is always one of my best friends before. I did not know what happened until one of my senior student told me about the non-fact accuse, and I was disappointed about his poor manners speaking evil behind my back.

    What else I can do to revenge him? Or I pretend myself to be a Saint and forgive him unconditionally?

    Actually, I am not that kind of hypocrite at all, anyway, I still take him as my good friend, besides I go to him directly to correct his bad conduct and advice him to apologize to me in front of our class, I don’t think there is any chance to shake hands again with him.

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