The association of applied foreign language set up the English Week, Christmas Party and Drama Performance. English Week is the grand occasion of applied foreign language, especially the popular haunted house; Christmas party always makes students to enjoy dancing; Drama Performance is one of the best ways to enhance students’ English skills. The association sets up those activity not only allowing students to experience difference cultures and celebrations but also to enhance sense of belonging to applied foreign language. Join us, you gain happiness. We always welcome you!
- bookLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
The association of applied foreign language set up the English Week, (/including) Christmas Party and Drama Performance.
English Week is one of the grand occasions* of applied foreign language, especially having* the most* popular haunted houses*;
A Christmas party always affords* students pleasure in dancing; Drama Performance may give* a good way to enhance students' English skills.
The Association held* those activities* not only allowing students to experience various* cultures and celebrations but also uplifting* the identifying*- sense about* applied foreign language . . . . . . . Join us, you will * gain happiness . . . . ... . . We sincerely* welcome you !
2008-12-17 00:51:36 補充：
1.Your text did not have errors in grammar.But I change some words in order to make it become more smooth and vital .These changes .* . are , only according to my own view, not necessry.
2. make /order/command/... someone +V原形=enforce someone + do/V原形+ something..=命令句.
2008-12-17 01:14:39 補充：
.He made me (should) tell the truth./ Father orders me (should) go abroad./The teacher commands you (should) go out./ =命令句.
3..既使...把make 當成普通V=..party makes使 students to去 enjoy dancing
=Party使 學生 去享受dancing (此句也太生硬)
2008-12-17 01:36:28 補充：
4..S + V +..not only A +....but also B.. // =A.B.詞性要一致
5.If I have the ticket,I will join you /
If you join us, you may/sholld... gain happiness .
Joining* us, you (will) gain happiness .
If you join us ,you (will) gain happiness .
Join us , and you gain happiness .
2008-12-17 01:42:52 補充：
Join us , you gain happiness .=V+ os ,S +gainV+n. =V,S+V.(文法怪怪)
2008-12-17 01:48:44 補充：
原句Join us , you gain happiness .=V+ os ,S +gainV+n.
=V.. , S+V....(文法怪怪) ...
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