belly asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我檢查與修正英文的文法或造句

以下的英文,

內容與對話是我自己編的,

希望有人能幫我糾正~

我有寫出中文再下去造出英文句子,

但明顯有點怪怪的及很多錯誤.

請幫我修正謝謝~

感恩!

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A: How long did you work in the company?

B: About more than 8 years.

A: Wo! This is very long period of time .

B: That’s right! I also planned that has worked in this company until the retirement.

A: If the benefits of company's would affects you to remain down?

B: Of course.

A: What benefits are most attract for you?

B: I thought that the retirement pension is the most important.

A: I agreed. Would you hope that the company provides you the credit card?

B: Why do you say that? I thought that does not necessity. The credit card will cause me to spend, on the contrary to save money.

A: How about the year-end bonus?

B: Actually I want it more and more. Who doesn't love the money?

A: Even we had more money; we don’t have time to rest and recreation.

B: Yes. I though the company should give us more vacation.

A: Vacation? It’s difficult like to ascend to heaven.

B: Ok! How about the overtime should pay rises in salary.

A: That perfect! Company shouldn’t parsimonious for saff.

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A: 妳在公司工作多久了?

B: 大約8年多了.

A: 哇!這算是很長的一段時間耶.

B: 對呀!我還打算在這家公司做到退休.

A: 公司的福利會影響妳持續工作下去嗎?

B: 當然.

A: 什麼福利最吸引妳?

B: 我覺得退休金是最重要的.

A: 我同意.那妳希望公司提供妳信用卡嗎?

B: 為何這樣說?我認為那不需要.信用卡只會使我花錢而不能存錢.

A: 那年終獎金如何?

B: 我當然希望是越多越好啊!誰不愛錢?

A: 就算我們在有錢,也沒時間休息與娛樂.

B: 是啊!我認為公司該給我們更多假期.

A: 假期?難如登天!

B: 好吧!那加班費薪水加倍如何?

A: 那很完美!公司不該對員工小氣!

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  • JAMES
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    A: How long did you work in the company?

    How long have you worked in the company?

    B: About more than 8 years.

    More than 8 years.

    A: Wo! This is very long period of time .

    Wow! that is quite a long time.

    B: That’s right! I also planned that has worked in this company until the retirement.

    Yes! I even plan to work in here until my retirement.

    A: If the benefits of company's would affects you to remain down?

    Would the benefits of the company affect your staying here?

    B: Of course.

    Of course.

    A: What benefits are most attract for you?

    Which benefits attract you the most?

    B: I thought that the retirement pension is the most important.

    I think the retirement pension does.

    A: I agreed. Would you hope that the company provides you the credit card?

    I agree. Do you wish company provides you credit card?

    B: Why do you say that? I thought that does not necessity. The credit card will cause me to spend, on the contrary to save money.

    Why do you say that? I think that won't be necessary. the credit card can only get me spending money but no saving at all.

    A: How about the year-end bonus?

    How about year-end bonus?

    B: Actually I want it more and more. Who doesn't love the money?

    Of course the more the better! who doesn't love money.

    A: Even we had more money; we don’t have time to rest and recreation.

    Even we have much money, we have no time for rest and recreation.

    B: Yes. I though the company should give us more vacation.

    Yes. I think company should let us have more vacations.

    A: Vacation? It’s difficult like to ascend to heaven.

    Vacation? It would be difficult, just like the mission impossible.

    B: Ok! How about the overtime should pay rises in salary.

    Ok! what about double the overtime pay ?

    A: That perfect! Company shouldn’t parsimonious for saff.

    That would be perfect! company shouldn't treat their employees parsimonious.

    ascend to heaven. 查過了 是一人得道雞犬升天的意思 因為不知道比登天還難怎麼說 所以改成"不可能的任務" 請自行斟酌

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