真的嗎 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英語達人幫我改信

因為廠商交的貨有問題,我去照了相片和影片,因為檔案太大無法全部mail,先寄幾張照片讓他先看,完整的檔案會燒成光碟郵寄給他

We took pictures and video of the fabric. We have attached 6 pictures with this e-mail, we hope these will helping you to understand the problem we had told you. We will send you the whole files in a disk via air way tomorrow.

Update:

先前有先告知布有問題,這次補照片讓對方瞭解我們所謂的"有問題"是什麼情況.

如果覺得我的表達不好也可以修改或增加

謝謝指正

Update 2:

對了,連結尾一起補上,我是這樣想

If you have any question or demand please let us know. We shall await hearing further from you.

Update 3:

Dear Jessica

我可以理解你想拼經濟的企圖

但你這樣做只會收到反效果

不是聰明的行為

Update 4:

對不起,不是部分有問題,是整個有問題,所以where the defects were found可以嗎?

另外,我想加上下面幾句

共有四箱尚未拆封,其中三箱各為100yards,另外一箱是76Yards

有四張照片是應廠商要求拍攝紙箱外部,上面標示各箱內裝的長度

另外四張照片是由標示76Yards那箱打開後所攝得

不好意思,讓您費心,謝謝您

Update 5:

Dear George,

謝謝您熱心協助,但是我前面的中文不是要翻成英文,是提供背景說明,請您幫我看看英文部分是否需要修正,上一段的後面四行才是要翻英文的部分

不好意思,還是謝謝您

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    因為廠商交的貨有問題,我去照了相片和影片,因為檔案太大無法全部mail,先寄幾張照片讓他先看,完整的檔案會燒成光碟郵寄給他

    Cause' the poducts delivered by the company have got some problems, I've taken certain pictures and films of them. But the computer file becomes so huge that it cannot be sent to you all in one. So I've decided instead to send him some pictures first while the disk of the complete file will be mailed to him later.

    先前有先告知布有問題,這次補照片讓對方瞭解我們所謂的"有問題"是什麼情況.

    如果覺得我的表達不好也可以修改或增加

    謝謝指正

    I've also notified him of the problems on the cloth previously. And this time, I'd send him some photos to let them better understand what our problems on the products really mean. I could further work on those poblems again to help them better understand it. I'd also appreciate of your pointing out my mistakes.

    If you have got any questions or requests, please let us know. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

    2008-12-09 16:21:00 補充:

    第一段訂正: ....so huge that it cannot be sent to "him"(not you) all in one.

    2008-12-09 17:05:05 補充:

    I've taken some pictures and a video of the fabric to show where the problems are. I therefore attach six photos with this e-mail. I hope these will help you to understand the problems we've told you before. I'll send you the complete file with a disk by airmail tomorrow.

    2008-12-09 17:05:16 補充:

    If you have any questions or requests, please let us know. We shall be waiting to hear further from you.

    2008-12-09 17:05:50 補充:

    There are four boxes which are completely sealed, three of which are 100yards of each, while the fouth one being of 76Yards.

    2008-12-09 17:06:03 補充:

    There are also four photos, requested by the company, showing the outside of the boxes, with the indications of the internal lengths of the boxes on each of the photos.

    2008-12-09 17:06:08 補充:

    The other four pictures are taken from the 76-yard box after it's been opened. Sorry to make you so much trouble, thanks.

  • 1 decade ago

    We took pictures and video of the fabric where the defects were found. We attach 6 pictures with this e-mail, and hope they will help you to understand the problem we have told you. Besides, we will send you the whole file of the pictures and video in a disk via air way tomorrow.

    If you have any question or demand please let us know. We shall await hearing further from you. ← ok

    Source(s): 國貿業務20餘年
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