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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

有關英文文法修改(急!

這是有關英文文法句子改寫, 有高手能''詳解並說明''嗎?

因為我看到這種題目都不知道如何下手, 拜託, 幫幫忙囉!!

當一下我的良師吧>''<

提醒是這樣的 Revise the following sentences and paragraph to eliminate all misplaced modifiers and awkward separations. Be prepared to explain your revisions.

Sentence practice

1.Shopping malls have become major cultural centers that many Americans decide often to visit.

2.Malls to the uninitiated only offer an almost endless string or stores, but to the seasond mall visitor, malls offer opportunities to regularly socialized, exercise , and people-watch that are unique .

3.Some people in the mall find ice-skating rinks even, bowling alleys, and other organized entertainment,and enjoy frequently indulging in the special food areas that many kinds of ethnic foods ,which sometimes look like sidewalk cafes.

4.Teenagers who are too young to drive soon discover that their parents will deliver them to malls , although providing a haven for teens may not have been the developers' main goal , which are safe , exciting places to routinely meet friends that have stimulating lights and sounds and smells.

5.Malls, because the many mall visitors like having them, also feature on occasion special events such as art exhibits, talent competitions,and antique shows.

再來是 Revise the following sentences to eliminate dangling elliptical clauses.

1.Classified ads are not the only place to find out about jobs一or even the best place一if organized for the job search.

2.Unless using an employment agency, a school's career services office may offer the best leads about jobs.

3.Until confident of being hired , using personal contacts to network can also increase opportunities for finding a good job.

4.Even communicating with companies that have not advertised jobs can help the job searcher, unless poorly written.

Update:

然後在請問一下....做這種題目...要做哪些訓練...例如.. 哪些文法要很懂, 或片語量.... 還有有類似這種題目學習的文法書嗎? 推薦看哪本呢?

我是要轉考二技外文, 本身非外語系, 所以有點吃力,

有沒有什麼讀書方法呢? 例如要看哪些書籍...

Update 2:

那個Kevin...我不是不想自己做...

我也嘗試去寫...但我真的不知道怎麼下手..

我有寫幾題... 只是我覺得我寫的都很怪...

如果能寫..我當然會靠自己把它做完..

只是想請教大家..看到這種題目該怎麼下手...該怎麼寫..

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Revise the following sentences and paragraph to eliminate all misplaced modifiers and awkward separations. Be prepared to explain your revisions.

    Sentence practice

    1.Shopping malls have become major cultural centers that many Americans often decide to visit.

    (1) often副詞在動詞之前, often decide…

    (2) 慣用decide to

    2. To the uninitiated, malls only offer an almost endless string or stores, but to the seasoned mall visitor, malls offer opportunities to regularly socialized, exercise, and people-watch that are unique.

    (1)To the,,,,,, but to the,,,對稱句法 。

    (2) specialized 當形容詞, 需有受詞 (exercise)

    (3) seasond ( type error) => seasoned (經驗豐富的)?

    3. Some people in the mall even find ice-skating rinks, bowling alleys, and other organized entertainment, and frequently enjoy indulging in the special food areas with many kinds of ethnic foods which sometimes look like sidewalk cafes.

    (1) Even甚至於…不置句尾。even find ….

    (2) frequently副詞在動詞之前.frequently enjoy…

    (3) 慣用 enjoy (verb) –ing

    (4) food areas that… ==>food areas with…

    (5) which修飾語句緊接被修飾語句(ethnic foods, which … ethnic foods which …)

    4.Teenagers who are too young to drive, soon discover that their parents will deliver them to malls which are safe , exciting places that have stimulating lights and sounds and smells, although providing a haven for teens to routinely meet friends may not have been the developers' main goal ,

    (1) which are …. 複數修飾Malls複數,

    (2) providing … for ….to….

    5. Malls also feature on occasion special events such as art exhibits, talent

    competitions, and antique shows because the many mall visitors like having them,

    (1) because ……修飾語句置句尾。

    2008-12-04 05:33:39 補充:

    Revise the following sentences to eliminate dangling elliptical clauses.

    1. Classified ads are not the only place or even the best place to find out about if jobs organized for the job search.

    (1) only place ….or …best place 連結.

    (2) about if jobs organized for..

    2008-12-04 05:37:31 補充:

    2. A school's career services office may offer the best leads about jobs unless using an

    employment agency,

    => unless…. 修飾語置句尾。

    3. Using personal contacts to network can also increase opportunities for finding a

    good job until confident of being hired ,

    => until修飾語置句尾。

    2008-12-04 05:42:48 補充:

    4. Even communicating with companies that have not advertised jobs can help the job

    searcher unless poorly written.

    => unless…修飾語連結前句.

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  • 1 decade ago

    1.Shopping malls have become major cultural centers that many Americans decide often to visit.

    11. Shopping mall has transformed into a kind of cultural center that many American always visit it on the weekends.

    2.Malls to the uninitiated only offer an almost endless string or stores, but to the seasond mall visitor, malls offer opportunities to regularly socialized, exercise , and people-watch that are unique .

    22. People who are uninitated to the mall would think that there are only stores and endless shopping lines. However for those regular visitors, it provides not only facility but also space for them to asociate with diefferent people.

    3.Some people in the mall find ice-skating rinks even, bowling alleys, and other organized entertainment,and enjoy frequently indulging in the special food areas that many kinds of ethnic foods ,which sometimes look like sidewalk cafes.

    33. You may even find ice-skating rinks and bowling alleys there. There are also other enterainments people may always go there and enjoy the special events. Especially food court, it provides variety choices of ethnic food which make the food court look like a sidewalk cafe'.

    Source(s): Too much..do it later...sorry.
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  • 1 decade ago

    太多了...這要湊很久20%難賺...

    幫你湊一句

    Shopping malls Already became many American's main shopping culture

    (Shopping malls 已經成為許多美國人主要的購物文化)

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