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Anne found a doctor in Italy . His name was Mr. Bean , he was a kind man. He checked Marilla`s eyes and told the three that Marilla`s eyes could heal , but she needed a long time . At night , Mrs. Lynde and Anne sat on the sofa . Mrs. Lynde hoped Anne would go back to Green Gables because she was a teacher and the school needed her , but Anne wanted to stay in Italy . Mrs. Lynde said ,” Marilla`s eyes can fully heal , so you don`t have to worry . Now , you have to go back to Green Gables .” Anne was sad , but Mrs. Lynde was right , so she went back to Green Gables .

On the way , Anne saw Diana . Anne called to Diana , but Diana saw her and cried ,” I hate you , Anne , I hate you .” Diana cried and ran back home . Anne was very shocked , she did not know what happened , why was Diana hating her ? She didn`t know anything . The next day , Mrs. Barry ran to Green Gables and called Anne`s name . She was very anxious and said ,” Did you see Diana , Anne ?” “ What happened to Diana ?” , asked Anne . A few minutes later , Anne knew everything and she ran to outside . One evening , Diana told Gilbert she liked him , but Gilbert said ,” I`m so sorry ,Diana . I can`t accept your love because I like Anne .” When he finished his speaking he went back to his house . Diana was very sad , she cried every day . Anne ran to find Diana , crying ,” Diana , Diana , where are you ? “ She met Gilbert and told him that Diana was missing , and they searched her for a long time . In the evening , Anne went to the bridge . There , she found Diana . Diana was under the bridge . Anne ran to hit Diana and said ,“ You are a bad girl .” Diana hit Anne , too . Such a horrible fight . When they were tired they stoped fighting . Anne embraced Diana and cried . She was very worried about Diana . Diana cried and said ,” Sorry Anne , I made a mistake , it is a big mistake . May I be your friend again ?” Anne answered ,” Sure .” They embraced each other and cried .

Update:

One year later , Anne and Gilbert took Marilla and Mrs. Lynde to Green Gables because Anne and Gilbert were getting married ,

Update 2:

and they wanted Marilla and Mrs. Lynde to go to their wedding ceremony . Marilla`s eyes were healed . Anne was very happy . Diana became a nurse , and she married a doctor . They founded a clinic next to Green Galbes .

Update 3:

請問有誰可以支薪幫忙改作文???

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    Anne found a doctor in Italy . His name was Mr. Bean , and he was a kind man. He checked Marilla`s eyes and told the three that Marilla`s eyes could be heal , but they tooks a long time . Mrs. Lynde hoped Anne would go back to Green Gables because she was a teacher and the school needed her , Anne wanted to stay in Italy . Mrs. Lynde said ,” Marilla`s eyes could be fully heal , so you don`t have to worry . Now , you have to go back to Green Gables .”On the way , Anne saw Diana and called her,Diana , but Diana saw her and cried ,” I hate you , Anne , I hate you .” Diana cried and ran back home .

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