? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

一段英文翻譯,請幫我檢查(最佳者賞20點)

1.概念:

以收納用的櫥櫃為出發點,讓每個使用者都可以依自已的想法與需要完成屬於個人的傢俱

This design was base upon the cabinet focus on that let every user be able to finish their personal furniture as their wish.

2.

它可以輕鬆組合不需要任何工具和技術, “積積傢傢”是新工匠、新玩具、新傢俱,輕輕鬆鬆的像玩積木一樣,打造你的傢俱。

It is easy to assemble without any technique and tools. "A block of furniture" is a new carpenter, new toy, new furniture. Make up your own furniture easily as well as make wooden blocks.

3. 功能:(怎麼用)

基本的 四種造形的組件,以類似木工榫接的方式相互組合,可依個人喜好創造整體造形,及依使用環境塑造適合的配置,隨時隨地都可以設計自已的傢俱。

There are four parts of basic shape. The way to make up it like tenon. The ensemble can be created as you like and be shaped to adapt to anywhere. Every one can design their own furniture on the go.

4. 情境:(請想像你的目標族群會怎麼使用它)

使用者(從幼稚園大班至成人)可以一起玩和學習,大家一起來”積積傢傢”學習分工合作的能力,一邊”積積傢傢”一邊在組合的過程中訓練邏輯思考的能力,在使用的過程中學習與成長…

User from kindergartener to adults can play and learn together. Everybody can learn how to share work and cooperate with the others and learn the ability of logical thinking from the course of doing "A block of furniture"

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1.概念:

    以收納用的櫥櫃為出發點,讓每個使用者都可以依自已的想法與需要完成屬於個人的傢俱

    This design was base upon the cabinet focus on that let every user be able to finish their personal furniture as their wish.

    我覺得可以改成

    This design was based on the cabinet, focusing on allowing every user to be able to finish their own personal furniture according to their idea and needs.

    2.

    它可以輕鬆組合不需要任何工具和技術, “積積傢傢”是新工匠、新玩具、新傢俱,輕輕鬆鬆的像玩積木一樣,打造你的傢俱。

    It is easy to assemble without any technique and tools. "A block of furniture" is a new carpenter, new toy, new furniture. Make up your own furniture easily as well as make wooden blocks.

    改成

    It is easy to assemble without any special technique and tools. "A block of furniture" is a new carpenter, new toy, new furniture. Make up your own furniture as easy as playing with lego.

    3. 功能:(怎麼用)

    基本的 四種造形的組件,以類似木工榫接的方式相互組合,可依個人喜好創造整體造形,及依使用環境塑造適合的配置,隨時隨地都可以設計自已的傢俱。

    There are four parts of basic shape. The way to make up it like tenon. The ensemble can be created as you like and be shaped to adapt to anywhere. Every one can design their own furniture on the go.

    改成

    There are four parts with basic shapes and assemble in a way similar to using tenon. The design can be created whatever way you like, and can be shaped to adapt to the surronding area. Everyone can design their own furniture anytime and anywhere.

    4. 情境:(請想像你的目標族群會怎麼使用它)

    使用者(從幼稚園大班至成人)可以一起玩和學習,大家一起來”積積傢傢”學習分工合作的能力,一邊”積積傢傢”一邊在組合的過程中訓練邏輯思考的能力,在使用的過程中學習與成長…

    User from kindergartener to adults can play and learn together. Everybody can learn how to share work and cooperate with the others and learn the ability of logical thinking from the course of doing "A block of furniture"

    改成

    Users from kindergarten to adults can play and learn together. Everybody can learn sharing work and cooperating with others, also train the ability of logical thinkig from the course of doing "A block of furniture".

    我個人覺得"積積傢傢"的英文名可以再想一想

    像"Lego Furniture"之類的

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    6 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    TO: BILLY"DOG"S

    所謂的賞20點,只是指,我會給我認為好的回答 "應得的報酬",20點是最高限制,給更多我也願意!!

    我只是急需確認,又找不到我的英文小老師~

    如果你很有家教就不會亂罵人,誰都沒有資格批評別人!請自重!!

    2008-12-01 20:47:06 補充:

    PS:

    如果你覺得我用語不當,請用勸告,我可以接受。

    賞20點只是想表達我的感謝,不合宜,我可以改成:送出20點,謝謝!

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    賞20電? 我們是要飯的? 真是沒家教

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