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文法修正及語句通順(20點)

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1. Since the instance messenger is popularized, many people have changed to chat with friends seeing through screen, rather than face to face;

see through 用法有問題嗎?

2. Online community has became the essential style of social groups by which mobilization and campaign determined the result of the United State presidential election;

by which 對嗎?

by which後面的句子想強調美國總統大選在網路上動員活動是成功關鍵

4. Its varying flexible applications facilitate our life and it is the efficiency that adoption from original usage to the internet is taken for granted.

網路因為便利而毫無疑問的被採用

5.The famous phrase “the medium is the message”, predicted McLuhan 40 years before the internet is prevailing, illustrates how this powerful new media extending communication possibilities, change and control human behaviours.

中間Mcluhan在網路發展40年前就提出這句,這用法好像怪怪的

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    1. Since the instance messenger is popularized, many people have changed to chat with friends by watching through screen, rather than face to face;

    see through (看穿,識破) => by watching through (例: watch TV)

    2. Online community has became the essential style of social groups by which mobilization and campaign determined the result of the United State presidential election;

     by which : (藉由 Online community線上社群),似無不妥.

    4. Its various flexible applications facilitate our life, and the adoption from original usage to the internet is taken for granted due to its efficiency. 網路因為便利而毫無疑問的被採用

    varying 改various (各種)。and the adoption...調整

    5.The famous phrase “the medium is the message, predicted by McLuhan 40 years before the internet is prevailing, illustrates how this powerful new media is extending communication possibilities, to change and control human behaviors.

    中間Mcluhan在網路發展40年前就提出這句,這用法好像怪怪的

    Predicted 改 Predicted by

    change and control改 to change and control

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