生活家 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

[請幫糾正錯誤]英文簡短句的修正 10 分

台灣地狹人稠,道路受到許多限制且錯綜複雜,加上道路普遍崎嶇不平,所以機車為台灣最常見的交通工具。尤其,近幾年油價上漲使學生對機車更為依賴,造成國內機車需求量提高。業者針對這些需求推出更多產品因應,以致於機車廠商競爭壓力愈來愈來重,如何藉提升產品設計來滿足顧客之需求,以刺激消費者再次購買的意願,已成為企業永續營的一項重要課題。

Taiwan, where is narrow and contains too much people, roads with many restrictions and are complicated. And because of rugged roads, the motorcycle become the most common transport. Especially, seeing the high fuel, students are much more dependent on motorcycle. As the result, the quantities of demand for motorcycle become higher up.

Manufacturers releases more products to respond the demand, which cause the pressure of competition between manufacturers are more and more difficult.

How to satisfy consumer’s demand by developing product design and attract purchase-desire of consumer has become an important task for firm.

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請各位幫忙檢查一下哪裡翻譯錯誤,非擅英文者請勿回答,更不要使用線上翻譯軟體(用翻譯軟體翻譯一看就知道了)。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    灣地狹人稠,道路受到許多限制且錯綜複雜,加上道路普遍崎嶇不平,所以機車為台灣最常見的交通工具。尤其,近幾年油價上漲使學生對機車更為依賴,造成國內機車需求量提高。業者針對這些需求推出更多產品因應,以致於機車廠商競爭壓力愈來愈來重,如何藉提升產品設計來滿足顧客之需求,以刺激消費者再次購買的意願,已成為企業永續營的一項重要課題。

    Taiwan is a small island, which is highly populated. Hence, the road systems are strictly restricted and complicated. Consequently riding motorcycle or scooter is a very common way of transportation, especially for the student population. It resulted in the factories produce various kind of motorcycle and scooters to meet the raising need. The competition between those companies turned white-hot. The top concern of those companies is how to offer better design and quality of goods to stimulate consumer to buy promoted models.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Taiwan is small an island it has high population density. Therefore, city planning in particular with road construction faces many restrictions and road path are often complicated. And because of rugged roads, the motorcycle became the most common transportation. Especially, in recent years seeing the high fuel cost, students are even more dependent on motorcycle. As result, demands for motorcycles are increasing.

    Manufacturer releases more products to respond the demand, which cause the pressure of competition between manufacturers rises.

    How to satisfy consumer’s demand by developing product design and attract purchase-desire of consumer has become an important task for firm.

    備註: 前面幾句多加了一些敘述使句子更為通順及完整.

    Source(s): mememe
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