Rate these lyrics :)?
1)Rate these lyrics(10= excellent)
2)If you have any correctments to make, then provide them here
3)Any other suggestions?
4)Does this make you feel anything? If so, what?
5)Do you like these lyrics anyway? Would you listen to this song if it was recorded?
6)Anything you would like to say, and, do you understand what this song talks about?
Don't focus on the flow, because even if I don't play any musical instruments, I do have a certain tune in my mind. So just answer based on the lyrics.
You wake up in the morning
And the where to hide and where to flee
Traveled enough and not in your dreams
Walk out the door and stare outside
In your memory you see another times
When love was everywhere
When people really cared
When wrong wasn't called right
When dark was dark and light was light
And you could dance and you could sing
Oooh you wanna return there
And as you trudge, bumped into Jim
And he remembers, can you see?
And you don't speak, you just nod "hi"
And in your heart you want to cry
This fatal world is not just yours
Oooh, can you remember?
So how was it?
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- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
2)correcting * no correcting the song flowed amazing. I am a big fan of alternative so I can see what the flow your grasping is. An amazing song*
3)Suggestions: in your lyrics , although you said that you dont play an insturment, include the number of beats you plan or add something like nanana so you have a place to leave your mark and dont forget the melody of the song
4)How it makes me feel: The song makes me feel relaxed and as if the song understands me.Its amazing
5)Would I: I would definetly listen to this song if it was recorded!
6_Nope I understand the song fully.
- Anonymous4 years ago
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
i think that it was i really interesting song...<33
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- 1 decade ago
6, it needs work, it doesn't make much sense.