POLL: What do you think of my short essay?

Tell me what you think!

So, A hundred words or less huh? Okay, here goes. I am brother, a son, and a friend. I am a unique individual who enjoys mayonnaise on his pizza,

and having deep conversations with his cat at 4am. I am not this nor that, but yet a happy medium of "in-between". I have made many accomplishments in my short time on this

earth, and even more mistakes. I am a lover... and a fighter ha ha. But, all in all, I am a funny person.

Update:

Don't worry about what it is for lol, I can't say.

It has to be short, and end in that particular sentence ha ha

Update 2:

It doesn't have to end in haha, it has to end in "But, all in all, I am a funny person."

but, you're right about the "ha ha" taking away from the rest of the essay.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    poor cat , thats all i can say.ads

  • 4 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's short.

  • 1 decade ago

    Mayo on pizza? You are a very strange little man.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Why does it need to end with "ha ha"? I think it's very well put together, except the "ha ha" .. it really does take away the depth of your essay. :)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I give it a D. Poorly written and sounds like a grade 7 wrote it. Sorry you asked.

  • xoxo
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Its sexy. Even the mayo on the pizza.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Yupp.

  • 1 decade ago

    I guess that if you made it 'end in that particular sentence ha ha', the GOOD for YOU!

    But... PLEASE don't ask me to 'rate' your question! OK!?

    To be HONEST, the longer I THINK about it, the LESS sense it makes!!!

  • Mariam
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    i like it .. particularly the second sentence.

    and even i think the "ha ha" takes the dept away.

  • 1 decade ago

    Very nice.

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