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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 1 decade ago

Ten points! Is "damaged production chain installation" an acceptable English phrase?

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This writing will review some factors that influence oil price such as government policy, weather, disaster, strike, damaged production chain installation, weakening dollar and speculation.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    It doesn't sound right.

    Here are some other suggestions:

    Mismanaged supply chains

    Mismanaged production chains

    inefficient production chains

    faulty production chain installations

    ineffective installation of production chains

    also I would not start off with "This writing", I would start off with something like...

    We will, or I will, or In this paper we will, or the object of this paper is...

    "This writing" is a passive voice, a direct voice is better.

    Source(s): professor
  • 1 decade ago

    why does everyone say "ten points!"

    It's not ten, it's seven.

    Dumb-----

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