Ten points! Is "damaged production chain installation" an acceptable English phrase?
This writing will review some factors that influence oil price such as government policy, weather, disaster, strike, damaged production chain installation, weakening dollar and speculation.
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
It doesn't sound right.
Here are some other suggestions:
Mismanaged supply chains
Mismanaged production chains
inefficient production chains
faulty production chain installations
ineffective installation of production chains
also I would not start off with "This writing", I would start off with something like...
We will, or I will, or In this paper we will, or the object of this paper is...
"This writing" is a passive voice, a direct voice is better.Source(s): professor
- 1 decade ago
why does everyone say "ten points!"
It's not ten, it's seven.