Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 1 decade ago

Ten points! Is "damaged production chain installation" an acceptable English phrase?


This writing will review some factors that influence oil price such as government policy, weather, disaster, strike, damaged production chain installation, weakening dollar and speculation.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    It doesn't sound right.

    Here are some other suggestions:

    Mismanaged supply chains

    Mismanaged production chains

    inefficient production chains

    faulty production chain installations

    ineffective installation of production chains

    also I would not start off with "This writing", I would start off with something like...

    We will, or I will, or In this paper we will, or the object of this paper is...

    "This writing" is a passive voice, a direct voice is better.

    Source(s): professor
  • 1 decade ago

    why does everyone say "ten points!"

    It's not ten, it's seven.


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