Enghlish-chapter 5 part C: writing complete (1) sentences
Part C- Read the paragraph find the sentence errors. On your paper, rewrite the paragraph as five sentences.
Eliza Chevez enjoys singing rounds, she taught her niece and nephew to sing "Row, Row, Row Your Boat" and late the three of them sang "Todos Ios Pollitos" when everyone sang a different line. All three voices blended together well and several listeners clapped.
- KLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Perhaps we can rewrite the paragraph (5 sentences) as follows:Eliza Chevez enjoys singing rounds.She taught her niece and nephew to sing, "Row, Row, Row Your Boat."Later the three of them sang, "Todos Ios Pollitos."When everyone sang a different line, all three voices blended together well.Several listeners clapped.
2008-11-26 16:07:05 補充：
seems better to say:
When everyone was singing a different line, all three voices blended together well.
Several listeners were clapping.
2008-11-26 16:11:14 補充：
If "Row, Row, Row Your Boat" and "Todos los Pollitos" are song titles, no comma is required after "sing" and "sang".