what do you think about this? opinions? ?

well i wrote this about a special some1

i just wanted to know what u guys thought about it...

i dont mind criticism at all..so whatever u think please tell me!

thanks;)

hopefully you'll get to know one day

and hopefully one day i wont be so confused

so unsure of what to think anymore..

hopefully one day ill know...and hopefully one day you'll understand

understand what i felt that one day

that day i looked at you, and knew the feeling was wrong.. but felt so right

that one Thursday when i caught your eye..and i caught onto something

but never knew if u caught the same feeling

hopefully one day ill understand fully, and hopefully i wont doubt myself anymore...

i wrote this abt 5 mins ago..i just felt like expressing my feelings somehow and felt this was the best way so ya!:)

*--one of lines in the poem or what ever you want to call it i was inspired by taylor swift's always and forever song!--i just changed it a little!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Take me now :o

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    I really like this long awaited burst of expression (for some reason I never use the tm poem. Hmm.) I can't criticize this, friend, I enjoy your story too much. Reminds me of people.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like it, but she/he might get the wrong side of the stick, it sounds like it can easily be a breaking up letter, a really really sweet breaking up letter if it was lol. You need to clarify what you intend what the message you want to send accross is.

    Nice letter though.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Aww... that is so cute. I know exactly how you feel. You should leave this note anonymously for them, I think anyone who recieved a letter like that would really enjoy it! :)

  • 1 decade ago

    i think its really cute and you should share this poem with that special someone

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    awwww! that special someone is a lucky someone :)

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