I need to make a better hook?
I am getting so tired of the piece of writing that I have to do for my American History class. This is the first sentence of one of my paragraphs...does anyone have any suggestions to make it more powerful?I am a freshman in high school if that matters to you...
This is the sentence:
'My family has a few Veterans who have served our country'
- IPhone5Lv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
Our country has been served by many veterans, one/some of them is/incude my (aunt, uncle, grandpa,).
That's all I can think of right now, hope this helps.