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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceHomework Help · 1 decade ago

I need to make a better hook?

I am getting so tired of the piece of writing that I have to do for my American History class. This is the first sentence of one of my paragraphs...does anyone have any suggestions to make it more powerful?I am a freshman in high school if that matters to you...

This is the sentence:

'My family has a few Veterans who have served our country'

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  • 1 decade ago
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    how about

    Our country has been served by many veterans, one/some of them is/incude my (aunt, uncle, grandpa,).

    That's all I can think of right now, hope this helps.

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