Can you guys take a look at this sentence and help me word it better?

Hi. This is the sentence:

Microsoft needs to make sure that it can prove to users, especially those who disabled UAC, that UAC in Windows 7 is an improved and refined tool that is useful and efficient.

Not sure if it is gramatically correct, or if it makes sense. Please help me make it more clear or better. Thanks.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Microsoft must prove to users, especially those who disabled UAC, that UAC in Windows 7 is an improved, refined tool that is both useful and efficient.

  • Microsoft needs to especially prove to those users who disabled UAC, that UAC in Windows 7 is an improved and refined tool that is useful and efficient.

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