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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicLyrics · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this song?

What do you think of this song I wrote?

Conclusion

Tossing glances back and forth now

Did we come to a conclusion?

Are we done with the endless nights and

Playing this stupid game?

And maybe I am trying to be cautious

Afraid of what you'll say

I'm used to being the one to pay

Never knowing what to think or if I'm the one to blame.

Why can't I just say goodbye

And end it all tonight?

Don't wanna be your plaything

Is is time to end it?

Then I'll be alone again

It's possible that I am only dreaming

Or perhaps not

Am I only hoping?

And with every word that was said

I had to make a choice

I chose to look far ahead

How long can you tie somebody down

Before the rope breaks?

And why can't I just say goodbye

And end it all tonight?

Don't wanna be your plaything

Is it time to end it?

Then I'll be alone again

It's possible that I am only dreaming

Or perhaps not

Am I only hoping?

And ever since our first date

The situation was not

Enough to capture your attention

I'm done with always being the one

To look like a clown, always break down

It's the end. Oh no

And maybe next time

If we ever give it another try

You will finally catch on

You're not the one I rely on

Why can't I just say goodbye

And end it all tonight?

Don't wanna be your plaything

Is it time to end it?

Then I'll be alone again

It's possible that I am only dreaming

Or perhaps not

Am I only hoping?

Tossing glances back and forth now

Did we come to a conclusion?

I want honest answers, suggestions for improvement etc.

Thanks.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Wow. Very good! You've got talent! (Whoever the guy is, you deserve someone so much better who appreciates your sensitivity and deep side.) This guy is treating you horribly. Being alone is much better than being treated poorly and taken for granted. Be patient and the right guy will come along.

  • 4 years ago

    SAD or ROCK? Okay.. I'm now not certain on that. If by way of unhappy you imply.... sluggish and form of emo... Evanescence has tons of those, as good as rock, comparable to: Hello Like You My Immortal Your Star Missing All That I'm Living For Sweet Sacrifice Weight of the World Going Under The Veronicas: All I Have Heavily Broken In Another Life Someone Wake Me Up My Chemical Romance has tons of well rock songs, and so does Switchfoot.

  • 1 decade ago

    I think it is a pretty good song. Is it to be a slow rock song or alittle faster im not sure, but pretty good.

  • 1 decade ago

    good lyrics but it depends on what the beat is and how its sung

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    its really nice `4real but i cant decided either i it will sound better rock or slow

  • 1 decade ago

    good but long

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Is good

  • 1 decade ago

    It is too long. Simplify.

  • 1 decade ago

    awesome i luv to sing so i sang it and i luv it i would so buy that song

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