Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 1 decade ago

how to word this thesis statement?

long story short i dont know how to word this.

amibition makes you do things you never thought you could.

any help would be greatly apreciated

1 Answer

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    whats wrong with what you have?


    ambition is an element of ones character which can lead a person to do things which they never would have seen themselves capable of doing.

    avoid using you and i in formal papers.

    Source(s): got a 4 on the ap eng language exam
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