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*兒* asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫改這篇英文作文...多謝!!

Sometimes in the school, will attend each kind of competition on behalf of the class.

在學校裡,有時候會代表班級參加各種比賽。

Even is not excels, is also compelled to enter.

甚至不是自己所擅長,也被迫報名參加。

What the impression is most profound is in the junior school.

印象最深刻的是在國中。

At that time is nominated by teacher participates the oratorical contest, this makes me to worry.

當時被老師提名參加演講比賽,這令我非常擔心。

Because does not have the experience, therefore has many difficulties in the preparation.

因為沒有經驗,所以在準備中有很多困難。

Until the competition ended. At the moment, the announcement position makes me be scared, I am third unexpectedly!

直到比賽結束的那一刻。宣布名次令我傻眼,我竟然是第三名!

Certainly not only this competition three people participate…

當然這比賽不只三人參加...

This is a special experience, lets me find that the human fills the potential!

這是一次特別的經驗,讓我了解到,人是充滿潛力的!

PS.因為我直接用翻譯,有懂文法的幫我看一下上下文有沒有怪怪的地方...或是有更好的說法...請幫忙修改

謝謝了!!ˊ0ˋ

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  • TC
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    1 decade ago
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    At school(in school不一定指學生),once in a while I will

    attend all sorts of competitions on behalf of the class.

    **once in a while=有時候多多少少

    在學校裡,有時候會代表班級參加各種比賽。

    Even those that I am not good at, I'll be forced to( take part in them).

    甚至不是自己所擅長,也被迫報名參加。

    **those指的是上面各種比賽,that I am not good at我所不擅長的

    **例: What are you good at ?I'm good at English.

    **compelled指的像是當兵是義務,不去會觸犯法律,所以用forced

    What impressed me most happened at my junior high.

    印象最深刻的是在國中。

    **take part in---參加,在此可省略

    At that time I was nominated by the teacher to participate a speech

    contest, this made me so worried.

    當時被老師提名參加演講比賽,這令我非常擔心。

    Because of my lack of experience, I had difficulties in preparation.

    因為沒有經驗,所以在準備中有很多困難。

    **慣用語lack of experience經驗不足

    At the end of the contest when they announced the winners, I was so

    stuuned to know that I came in third(place)!

    直到比賽結束的那一刻。宣布名次令我傻眼,我竟然是第三名!

    得第三名:come in third place,come in third得第三

    Certainly there were not only 3 competitors in the contest

    當然這比賽不只三人參加...

    **competitor=參加比賽的人

    That was a special experience which made me understand the ultimate human potential.

    這是一次特別的經驗,讓我了解到,人是充滿潛力的!

    **which makes me realize(understand)讓我了解到

    例:He's dating other girls which makes me understand that he's a two

    timers.他跟其他女孩約會,讓我了解到他腳踏兩隻船

    2008-11-10 14:39:55 補充:

    打錯一個字stunned真的

    Source(s): 自己在外國生活多年經驗
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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    while i was in shcool, sometimes i was compelled to represent my class in various competitions even though i was not even good at it.

    most profound impression was back in junior high, i was nominated by my teacher to participate in a speech contest. i was very worried and it was difficult for me to prepare due to lack of experience.

    i was astonished at the end of the contest, i came in third place, of course the contestants were more than 3 people.

    this special experience let me understoond that people are full of potential.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Sometimes in the school, I(要有主詞) will attend each kind of

    competition on behalf of the class.

    Even is not excels, is also compelled to enter.

    What the impression is most profound is in the junior school.

    At that time is nominated by teacher participates the oratorical

    contest, this makes me to worry.

    Because does not have the experience, therefore has many

    difficulties in the preparation.

    Until the competition was(要有B動詞) ended. At the moment, the

    announcement position makes me be scared, I am third unexpectedly!

    Certainly not only this competition three people participate…

    This is a special experience, lets me find that the human fills the potential!

    Source(s): 用Word改的,不錯吧!
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