朋友說：我寫出來的英文像翻譯軟体

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朋友說，我寫出來的英文像翻譯軟体寫出來的

請問要怎麼改進呢？我講的如下：能不能幫我「人性化」看看？

我的英文、文法有很多問題

oh.. my ENG grammar rearlly many problem..

但我的英聽才是重點

but my ENG listen was important..

我覺得我英聽和狗屎一樣

i felt my listen was bullshit...

我試過許多方法去改善我的英聽，但是沒有效果，或許我試過之後有了一點的改善，但我覺得他改善的非常少。

i tried many way improve my listen...but none result...maybe i tried it then i have a letter improve ... but i felt it was a letter.

非常少！如果我英文不好，我會很擔心。

Very a letter !!!!!!!!!!! i am afraid it...if i can't have good ENG

所以我需要改善英文

so..i want it better !!

關於文法方面，我會去看下面的網站學習。http://xxxxxxxxxxxxx/

about grammar .. i will going to go the web study ... the web as below :

http://xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/

Update:

這句有沒有比較不像？如下：

好的，我放學後，會過去妳家

ok... i will going to go your home that i after university school

Answer 1

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不要氣餒啊!像翻譯軟體有什麼關係,至少還翻的出來,你只要多加強文法和單字就可以進步很多了~~

我的英文、文法有很多問題

Oh.. My English grammar really has many problems.

但我的英聽才是重點

But my listening is the most important question.

我覺得我英聽和狗屎一樣

I feel my listening is as bad as bull*****.

我試過許多方法去改善我的英聽，但是沒有效果，或許我試過之後有了一點的改善，但我覺得他改善的非常少。

I have tried many ways to improve my listening,but it's helpless. Maybe I have improved a little after my studying, but I feel my improvement is limited.

非常少！如果我英文不好，我會很擔心。

It improved a little!!!!!!!!!!! I worry about my poor English.

所以我需要改善英文

So I have to improve my English.

關於文法方面，我會去看下面的網站學習。

Concerning the grammar, I study it on the following website.

好的，我放學後，會過去妳家

Ok... I am going to your home after school.

PS:注意首字要大寫, I 也要大寫,句子要有動詞,but為連接詞,必須連接兩個句子,複數名詞要加s,注意時態

Answer 2

的確不要氣餒,多一點的練習就會有進步

看完你全部的翻譯，還是建議你可以找一本文法書修正一些地方

我覺得你可以朝幾個方向修正

1.像是英文最重要的文法結構就是主詞＋動詞，你的第一句就沒有動詞喔！

2.若這是一整段，你的時態要一致，否則看文章的人會霧煞煞喔！ EX. 我的英聽才是重點（現在還是吧！因為你上一句是表示”現在“文法有很多問題）

3.可數名詞表示複數的話一定要加s, EX: many problems

我的英文、文法有很多問題

Oh.. There are many problems in my English grammar.

但我的英聽才是重點

But my listening is the worst

我覺得我英聽和狗屎一樣

I feel that my listening ability is just as bad as bull ****

我試過許多方法去改善我的英聽，但是沒有效果，或許我試過之後有了一點的改善，但我覺得他改善的非常少。

I have tried many methods to improve listening, but it’ helpless. Well, maybe I have improved a little after studying, however, the improvement is very limited.

非常少！如果我英文不好，我會很擔心。

Because of little improvement, I am worried about my poor English.

所以我需要改善英文

That’s why I would like to improve English.

關於文法方面，我會去看下面的網站學習。

About grammar, I would check out the website as follows

http://xxxxxxxxxxxxx/

好的，我放學後，會過去妳家

Okay, I will go to your place after school.

Source(s): 我自己的學習經驗