Renny L asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

!20點!!!急!!英文文法訂正!!!急!

以下是需要被訂正的內容!!文法及修詞!!謝謝各位!!!!

Everyone created to be equal seems only an ideal dream. We have to doubt that regardless of race and sex that everyone is equal is only a pronouncement that no one takes it seriously. Most white people have white superior, they views themselves are greater than every other race people. Most white people think that African Americans is born to be their slaves and not deserve to be treat as equal as them. The white people tend to use religious to control and prevent African American would rebellious. For example, Harriet A. Jacobs says that the church try to teach them that if the black people disobey their master, then the god will punish them. Moreover, the white people release many cheap land that give to white settler to buy; however, the white people forbidding that African Americans own the lands, so the African Americans only can rent the lands from white people. This is one of the examples that show the unfair treatment due to their races.

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    Everyone created to be equal seems only an ideal dream. We have to doubt that regardless of race and sex that everyone is equal is only a pronouncement that no one takes it seriously. Most white people have white superior, they views regard themselves are greater more superior than every any other race people. Most white people Caucasian think that African Americans is are born to be their slaves and not deserve to be treat as equal as them. The white people Caucasian tends to use religious religion (動詞後面要接名詞或副詞) to control and prevent African Americans’ rebel. For example, Harriet A. Jacobs says that the church try to teach them that(that 是可以當主詞的關係代名詞, 但這裡不需要) if the black people disobey their master, then the god will punish them. Moreover, the Caucasian release many cheap lands that give to white settlers to buy; however, the Caucasian forbid (主詞之後要用動詞)the African Americans own the lands, so the African Americans only can rent the lands from Caucasian. This is one of the examples that show the unfair treatment due to their races.

    Race 已經有種族的意思, 不必加people.

    種族的優越用superior較恰當 rebel

    Caucasian白人 – white people也可以但用Caucasian更專業

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