Powy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Critique My New Poem: JiJi is Back?

My heart is full of happiness

JiJi is coming back

JiJi is coming back to Me

My joy is over flowing

The sweet flower is back

I will hold her between my arms

The beauty of the world

The love of my heart

JiJi is back

The dark clouds have vanished

The angel of light I can see

My heart is dancing

My breath is sweltering

JiJi my love is back

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    Its nice .glad ur happy now.

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