Critique My New Poem: JiJi is Back?

My heart is full of happiness JiJi is coming back JiJi is coming back to Me My joy is over flowing The sweet flower is back I will hold her between my arms The beauty of the world The love of my heart JiJi is back The dark clouds have vanished The angel of light I can see My heart is... show more
My heart is full of happiness
JiJi is coming back
JiJi is coming back to Me
My joy is over flowing
The sweet flower is back
I will hold her between my arms
The beauty of the world
The love of my heart
JiJi is back
The dark clouds have vanished
The angel of light I can see
My heart is dancing
My breath is sweltering
JiJi my love is back

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