Shary
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Shary asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 1 decade ago

Critique my New Poem ............... ** The Shredding of JiJi **?

It is all over

The mirror is broken

JiJi is gone

JiJi is mystery

JiJi is devoured by demons

JiJi JiJi

The flower that blossomed

has withered

Still there is

faint voice from the past

of sweet JiJi

that once

she was

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