Powy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Critique My New Poem... The Shredding of JiJi ?

Update 2:

It is all over

The mirroris broken

JiJi is gone

JiJi is mystry

JiJi is devoured by demons

JiJi

The flower that blossomed

has withered

Still there is

faint voice from the past

of sweet JiJi

that once

she was

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Fantastic!

    The emptiness of the empty white space really captured my imagination. And the title was just splendid. Who is Jiji it left me wondering. I only wish it was a little longer, but still it left me feeling satisfied but hungry fro more.

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