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renic asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

唔該幫我改1首eng詩[20點]

可以全首改哂,,但係要同呢首詩ge內容差唔多

or可以張首詩一d字改左佢

但唔好只係改幾個字

題目:Childen's Prayer

Let the teachers of our class

Set us tests that we all pass.

Let them never ever care

About what uniform we wear.

Let them always clearly state

It's OK if your homework 's late.

Let them say it doesn't matter

When we want to talk and chatter.

Let our teachers shrug and grin

When we make an awful din.

Let them tell us every day.

There are no lessons.Go and play.

Let them tell our mum and dad

We're always good and never bad.

Let them write in their report

We are the best class they have taught

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Very, very good. Perfect!

    I prefer to use "class" in stead of the "lessons" for class has 1 syllable whereas lessons has 2 syllables. class also = lesson

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