魚魚 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

reply letter 檢查修改

Mr.XXX,

We previous provided for our stock list, we would like to know if you have any comment.

Our goods could be ship within four months.

If you have interest in our goods , please don't hesitate to let us know!

We look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

請各位大大幫我檢查 這封信是否有不通順處 :)

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  • 1 decade ago
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    With the stock list we provide previously, we would like to know if you have any comment.

    1.最好不好前we,後we

    2.previous是修飾動請provide,應改為副詞proviously

    Our goods could be shipped within four months

    1.be 動詞後面要接過去分詞,”被”

    其他應沒什麼問題了

  • 1 decade ago

    should be:

    we looking forward to hear from you

  • rman n
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Mr XXX,

    We would like to know if you have any comment about the previous stock list provided by us. Kindly note that our goods could be shipped within four months. If you are interested in our goods, please do not hesitate to let us know.

    Look forward to hearing from you soon.

    Sincerely.

    Source(s): me
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