面試~英文自我介紹,請幫我看看有沒有問題

可以請各位幫我看一下我的英文自我介紹有沒有問題? (我是用中文下去翻的) My name is ***,25 years old,unmarried,graduates in the National Taipei University of Technology’s Mechanical Engineering Department, can the fluent Chinese and Taiwanese and the simple English. My individuality gets on the well with others and reaponsibly and... show more 可以請各位幫我看一下我的英文自我介紹有沒有問題?
(我是用中文下去翻的)
My name is ***,25 years old,unmarried,graduates in the National
Taipei University of Technology’s Mechanical Engineering
Department, can the fluent Chinese and Taiwanese and
the simple English.
My individuality gets on the well with others and reaponsibly and
careful and learning capability ang communication very well.
At persent has three years work experience , familiar Auto cad and
solidworks and foundation mechanism. Once attend drawing and
assmbly of welding .
At peraent the work content includes the new product to estimate and development and great to product and induct between the customer
and the operator.
The persent stage goal hope because of the multiplex work training
can have on opportunity a yet higher goal in futuer five years.


補充 : 以下是自我介紹的中文意思

我叫***,今年25歲,單身,畢業於台北科技大學機械工程學系,會流利國台語及... cad、solidwarks及基礎機械原理。曾參與焊接機的繪製及組裝,目前擔任的...
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