阿正 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英語高手幫我批改作文,最好是abc,或是英語老師。

An Unforgettable Teaching Experience

With the prevailingly economical depression in the world, more and more people find it difficult finding a satisfying job. Unfortunately, I am subject to this circumstances as well. Thus My amiable aunt arranged a good job for me through her friends _being a teacher in a private vocational school. Being a teacher! Wow ! That sounds so noble! As soon as I heard of the opportunity, I accepted it.

Having taught in this school for more than one month, I found that it was totally beyond my imagination before. Given that the students’ qualities are very awful, those who teach there can afford it easily, which has proven to be wrong. One day when I was teaching in the class, my school administration officer came into my class with an order asking for any students to take out any contrabands from their schoolbag, such as tobaccos, knives, and drugs to the podium. However, there was still a student sitting on the chair without any move. Then, he was staring at the officer like a tiger when called by the officer, saying “Fxxk your mother, damn it…” five times in a heavy Taiwanese accent with a chair in his hand, acting as if he had wanted to throw it to the officer.

還沒有寫完,就是請高手幫我批改哪些文法跟句子表達有誤,標準英語怎麼寫,謝謝!

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    An Unforgettable Teaching Experience With the prevailing[1]economic[2] depression in the world, more and more people find it difficult to find[3] a satisfactory[4] job. Unfortunately, I fell victim to[5] this circumstance[6] as well. Thus my amiable aunt arranged a good job introduced by her friends for me[7] - being a teacher in a private vocational school. Being a teacher! Wow! That sounds so noble! As soon as I heard of the opportunity, I accepted it. Having taught in this school for more than one month, I found that it was totally beyond my imagination before. Given that the students’ qualities are awful[8], those who teach there can afford it easily, which has proven to be wrong[a]. One day, when I was teaching in the class, my school administration officer came into my class and asked some[9] students to take out any contraband[10] from their schoolbags[11], such as tobaccos, knives, and drugs to the podium. However, there was still a student staying in his seat[12]. Then, he stared[13] at the officer like a tiger when called by the officer, shouting[14] “Fxxk your mother, damn it…” five times with[15] a heavy Taiwanese accent with a chair in his hand, acting as if he was going[16] to throw it at[17] the officer.

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    1) prevailing(adj):普遍的 2) economic(adj):經濟上的; economical(adj):節約的、經濟的 3) find it difficult to do something (正確句型) 4) satisfactory(adj):合適的、滿足要求的; satisfying(adj):令人高興/滿意的 5) fall victim to:落難於; subject to something:容易受...影響 6) this circumstance/ these circumstances (正確用法) 7) (注意句型) 8) awful(adj): very bad (因此別重複使用very) 9) (注意句型,勿支配不恰當中文因素) 10) contraband (不可數名詞) 11) (必須是複數) 12) (注意句型) 13) (注意時態) 14) (注意用詞) 15) (注意詞語搭配) 16) (注意表達形式) 17) throw something to somebody把東西丟給某人; throw something at somebody用東西來砸某人 a) 句子意思模糊,請修訂

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