Justin asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文高手幫我審閱以下英文履歷有無文法錯誤?

如題~是英文履歷要用的~請幫我檢查看是否有文法錯誤~或用字錯誤的地方~附上的中文是它的原意

1.在I-NING HIGH SCHOOL完成高中學業,主修資訊管理,現階段就讀於Jinwen University of Science and Technology旅館管理系,目前二年級在學中,並具備電腦應用與旅館管理相關技能。

I-NING HIGH SCHOOL completes the high school studies, majors in the information management, the present stage goes study in Jinwen University of Science and the Technology hotel management department, at present the second grade in study, and has the computer application and the hotel management related skill.

2.房務人員

The room serves personnel

3C賣場銷售人員

3C to sell field personnel

9月 2007~

In September 2004~ in June 2007

3.這是個工讀的工作,任職於家電部門,主要負責介紹產品及客人諮詢,並協助運貨、補貨、賣場清潔,工作內容瑣碎繁多,遇到過很多不同個性的客人,一天工作8個小時,不僅能賺點生活費,更能增加經驗,是個充實且有趣的工作。

This is works part-time and studies part-time, holds an office in the electrical appliances department, the primary cognizance introduction product and the visitor consult, and assists to transport freight, to make up the goods, to sell the field to be clean, work content trivial many, has run into many different individuality visitors, one day works for 8 hours, not can only gain living expenses, can increase the experience, is an enrichment, and interesting work.

4.證照:電腦硬體裝修、網頁設計、中文打字、英文打字

The card illuminates:The computer hardware repair, the homepage design, Chinese typing, English type

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  • JAMES
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    1Graduated from I-NING high school and majored in Information management. Now study in Jinwen University of Science and Technology, major in Hotel management as a sophormore.with the related skill of computer application and hotel management.

    2.房務人員

    The room service personnel

    3C賣場銷售人員

    3C to store sales personnel

    9月 2007~

    September 2004~ June 2007

    3.It was a part-time job, worked at the electrical home appliances department, introducing products and answering questions , also assisting delivery,goods supplying and cleaning working place. the works contented every veriety and met many customers with different characters . working 8 hours a day, not only can earned living expenses, but also can gain more working experience,it was a substantial and interesting work.

    4.The certification:The computer hardware repair, the homepage design, Chinese typing, English typing

    希望有幫到你

  • 1 decade ago

    有關英文面試、自我介紹或是求職面試英語還有英文自傳翻譯等等的問題,你可以參考下面的部落格那個部落格有分享很多實用的文章,對你的求職應該很有幫助!他也有在幫人翻譯,有翻譯的問題也可以問那個部落格的格長!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007

    ps上面有很多範例

    Source(s): 很實用的求職、翻譯部落格
  • 1 decade ago

    看來您這是履歷的其中一小段或是關鍵字的部分,如果一般沒有在補習班上英文作文課的話,自己的英文作文能力又普通,要寫好一篇英文履歷確實會有一些難度,我之前也遇到相同問題,可花了我許多時間尋求協助,最後有找到一個免費資源,您可以參考看看:

    英文履歷產生器:

    http://www.englishplatform.com./_tw/06_archive/01_...

    英文自傳產生器:

    http://www.englishplatform.com./_tw/06_archive/11_...

    當然,如果不想內容跟別人類似,您則另外可以選擇在這裡面花點小費用請線上老師幫您編修,我想應該就可以幫您迎刃而解了哦!!

    Source(s): 自己的經驗
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