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今年因為油價高漲的關係,導致全球許多航空公司面臨重大的危機

有的甚至已經倒閉,有的小規模航空公司預估撐不過今年冬季

而我國的中華航空和長榮航空也同樣面臨同樣的問題

兩家航空公司近兩年都是虧損的狀態,原因還是和油價上漲,燃料稅飆高所致

長榮航空甚至2008年第一季虧損已高於2007年整年虧損

這兩年無疑是航空業最大的寒冬

This year because of the oil price the relation upsurging

make many global airlines faced a major crisis,

Have of even have already closed down or encounter merger,

the small scale airline having estimates to support however this year winter.

My country the China airlines and EVA airlines aviation also equally face a same problem

Are the appearances of deficiencies for all of two years with airline,

the reason still soar with oil price, fuel use tax violent wind

EVA airlines even the first season of 2008 lossing in business have already been higher

than 2007 whole year to loss in business.

Are undoubtedly the biggest cold winters in airlines industry for these two years.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    今年因為油價高漲的關係,導致全球許多航空公司面臨重大的危機

    This year(,) because of (the upsurge of ) the oil price (the relation 去除,英文上只要有because of 即已表達,加了此字似成了中式英文) (made, 後面的face使用過去式,應一致) many airlines (in the world) faced a major crisis, (many global airlines 很多的全球航空公司,意思似不符合文意,應是 全球很多的航空公司,故改為in the world)

    This year, because of the upsurge of the oil price made many airlines in the world faced a major crisis,

    有的甚至已經倒閉,有的小規模航空公司預估撐不過今年冬季

    (some of them) (have even already been) closed down or encounter merger,

    the small scale airline(s) (were estimated to (can’t be kept through) (the winter of) this year.

    some of them have even already been closed down or encounter merger, the small scale airlines were estimated to can’t be kept through the winter of this year.

    而我國的中華航空和長榮航空也同樣面臨同樣的問題

    (and) the China airline(s去除) and (the)EVA airline(s去除) (of my country) are also facing the) same problem

    and the China airline and the EVA airline of my country are also facing the same problem,

    兩家航空公司近兩年都是虧損的狀態,原因還是和油價上漲,燃料稅飆高所致

    both of the two companies (stay in loss situation) in (latest) two years, (the result was caused by the soar) of oil price (and) (fuel tax rate).

    both of the two companies stay in loss situation in latest two years, the result was caused by the soar of oil price and fuel tax rate.

    長榮航空甚至2008年第一季虧損已高於2007年整年虧損

    EVA airline’s (the loss of first season in 2008 even) higher than (the) whole (year’s loss of 2007 ).

    EVA airline’s the loss of first season in 2008 even higher than the whole year’s loss of 2007,

    這兩年無疑是航空業最大的寒冬

    the latest two years ,no doubt, are the coldest winters to the airline industry.

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  • 1 decade ago

    今年因為油價高漲的關係,導致全球許多航空公司面臨重大的危機

    有的甚至已經倒閉,有的小規模航空公司預估撐不過今年冬季

    而我國的中華航空和長榮航空也同樣面臨同樣的問題

    兩家航空公司近兩年都是虧損的狀態,原因還是和油價上漲,燃料稅飆高所致

    長榮航空甚至2008年第一季虧損已高於2007年整年虧損

    這兩年無疑是航空業最大的寒冬

    Because of the rising of oil price this year.

    It has resulted many global airlines facing a huge amount of crisis,

    Even some of them had already closed down.And other small scale airlines has predicated that they couldn't pass during this year of winter.

    Also as the China airline and EVA airline faced a same problem

    The two airlines were in the condition of deficient finance,it was due to the rising of oil price and fuel tax .

    EVA airlines even the lossing in business in the first season of 2008 have already been higher than whole year's in 2007.

    Undoubtedly,it's the most difficult period of airline industries in this two years.

    Source(s): 自己
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