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今年因為油價高漲的關係,導致全球許多航空公司面臨重大的危機 有的甚至已經倒閉,有的小規模航空公司預估撐不過今年冬季 而我國的中華航空和長榮航空也同樣面臨同樣的問題 兩家航空公司近兩年都是虧損的狀態,原因還是和油價上漲,燃料稅飆高所致 長榮航空甚至2008年第一季虧損已高於2007年整年虧損 這兩年無疑是航空業最大的寒冬 This year because of the oil price the relation upsurging make many global airlines faced a major crisis, Have of even have... show more 今年因為油價高漲的關係,導致全球許多航空公司面臨重大的危機

有的甚至已經倒閉,有的小規模航空公司預估撐不過今年冬季

而我國的中華航空和長榮航空也同樣面臨同樣的問題

兩家航空公司近兩年都是虧損的狀態,原因還是和油價上漲,燃料稅飆高所致

長榮航空甚至2008年第一季虧損已高於2007年整年虧損

這兩年無疑是航空業最大的寒冬

This year because of the oil price the relation upsurging

make many global airlines faced a major crisis,

Have of even have already closed down or encounter merger,

the small scale airline having estimates to support however this year winter.

My country the China airlines and EVA airlines aviation also equally face a same problem

Are the appearances of deficiencies for all of two years with airline,

the reason still soar with oil price, fuel use tax violent wind

EVA airlines even the first season of 2008 lossing in business have already been higher

than 2007 whole year to loss in business.

Are undoubtedly the biggest cold winters in airlines industry for these two years.
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