- 屋頂上的月光Lv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
One day, Jack was practicing wrestling in the gym. When throwing his opponent down, he saw a beautiful girl, Jully. He fell in love with her at first sight. He made a love announcement and praise her beauty to her. At last Jully accepted his date. Jack constantly made phone calls to Jully everyday and told that he always threw his opponents down in practicing wrestling. And Jully feel disgusted and impatient of Jack's arrogance. Several days later, they broke up.Source(s): myself
- ElisaLv 71 decade ago
Corrections for better/correct word usage/grammar:
He announced his love for her and praised for her beauty. At last Jully accepted his love.
2008-10-11 10:55:20 補充：
Jack made phone calls to Jully everyday and told her that he always threw his opponents out in the wrestling practice. Jully felt disgusted and intolerant of Jack's arrogance.
By the way, I removed the word “constantly” because “everyday” already has that same indication.