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Anonymous asked in 娛樂與音樂明星與名人 · 1 decade ago

請問各位!! 我這樣寫英文作文可以嗎??

I went to Zhou Zhuang during the period of holidays, O.K...The person didn't be very many!!

Otherwise I really go crazy...Although be not will not have body odor flavor in summer!!But...The person pushes the person's feeling not good...

Because of there being a more special person in we...So, while walking while strolling we will have the person of flank to say: 【ㄟㄟㄟ ..is he that television star?? performance of that!!】the feeling is still pretty strange..

However!!!Still pretty divertive!!

We are over there stroll a while, took a ship, still ate a big Zha crab in the evening!!Eat well very much~~~~

Rained after....We go home!!

Because go home of too late, so cause Sunday's time the whole days are sleeping...Didn't hear lesson at all...!!!

這樣寫可以嗎??!!

如果有比較好的表達語法方式可以幫我修改一下嗎??!!

拜託囉!!!

Update:

這個假期我去了周莊,還好那天人沒有很多..不然我真的會瘋掉...!!! 因為在我們之中有一個比較特別的人!!所以每當我們經過一家店或一群人時就會聽到旁邊再那邊問:{你是明星嗎??演戲的那個某某某!!!}在旁邊的我們聽到就會覺得很...因為我們是出來玩的!!可是卻好像一直在被人家注意而不能很自在...!!

但後來我們看完了一些景點後就坐船回原始的地方了!!

因為下雨了!! 所以吃完晚餐的大閘蟹之後就回家了!!

也因為回家的太晚!!導致星期天的輔導課整天都在睡覺根本沒辦法聽課....

這個氏中文!!

Update 2:

我已經選好最佳解答了!! 大家可以不用回答了!!因為要四個小時才能選擇所以只能等到明天啦!!

Update 3:

universally known 這個是什麼意ㄙㄚ??!!!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I went to Zhou Zhuang during the holidays. There were not a lot of people overthere!Although, there didn't smell bad from other people in such summer, it still made me crazy, because I did't like that somebody pushed me.

    One of my friend is universally known, so when we walked or hanged around, I would hear someone by my side saying" Oh, oh, oh! Is he the TV star? Show me something! " I felt that it was quite strange, however, it was very fun for me.

    We lingered away for a while by ships, and also ate the crab in the evening! I have eaten very much. We didn't go home until it started to rain.

    Due to it late when I arrived home, I slept whole day on Sunday. Now, I don't want to go to school tomorrow at all.

    我提幾個重點給你:

    1.大閘蟹 不是這樣直接翻 說 the crab 表達一下就可以了

    2.你的現在式過去式要分清楚 這篇文章都是寫已經發生過的事 所以要用過去式 除非是"常態" 像是你的朋友是名人 你才能用現在式表是

    3.ㄟ是屬於中文注音 不可以寫在英文作文中

    4.單字的用法動詞名詞不能混著用 看得出來你有查字典 只是你看得不夠細 需要再加強一下

    5.片語用法須要注意 不是可以套進中文就可以用

    6.你去了Zhou Zhuang 我不清楚台灣有這個地名 如果妳能詳細說明我比較好幫你改 不然就是照我文章打的

    7.我整篇文章都幫你改過了 也許你會覺得我所寫的在用法上有誤 但是英文用法本來就與中文相異 所以如果有問題 還是歡迎你繼續問.

    2008-10-06 20:54:25 補充:

    還有分段的部分 還可以分的再好一點 我重新幫你分過了

    我加進一些片語可以讓你學得更精準一點 不會的字可以查查字典 或是問我

    英文要學好可以很簡單 就是多看多背多聽

    也可以很難 就是不看不背不聽

    2008-10-06 21:32:58 補充:

    廣為人知的

    is known 被人知道

    universally 廣泛地

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  • 1 decade ago

    Of my vacation I went to Zhou Zhuang. There were not so many people or else made me crazy easely.

    Although had a few people also had better smell. I just don't like people crowd own place I stand.

    .... .....

    I don't know what are you talking about!

    乾脆直接寫中文讓我們翻成英文好嗎? 對不起接下來的句子幫不上忙

    2008-10-06 20:59:45 補充:

    One guy of us whom looks like a superstar. When we went by stores, we always heard "there seems to be like a idol, let's take a look!". We were get trouble of that and don't like this situation was happened!

    2008-10-06 20:59:51 補充:

    Because we were happy to walk around with free style, but we were keeping watching and felt uncomfortable. When we got some view and finish a trip, then we went home by ship.

    2008-10-06 21:10:20 補充:

    We finish crabs in diiner and wanted to go home becouse of the weather is starting raining. We went home too late cause of the lecture on Sunday is waste away all the day.

    2008-10-06 21:10:44 補充:

    sorry~ 拼錯 dinner

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