幫我檢查我的造句英文文法有沒有錯誤

這是我的仿造造句練習, 請幫我檢閱有沒有錯誤~拼字.文法.等 或是句子有更好或簡便實用的替代句. A: Hello! I am coming to visit your city. Could we arrange a meeting? B: Oh! I'd like to. When will you come and left here? A: Well, I am arriving to the Plaza Hotel on the June 13th at 9:30 and leaving hotel on June 16th at 7:15 a.m. to... show more 這是我的仿造造句練習,

請幫我檢閱有沒有錯誤~拼字.文法.等

或是句子有更好或簡便實用的替代句.

A: Hello! I am coming to visit your city. Could we arrange a meeting?


B: Oh! I'd like to. When will you come and left here?


A: Well, I am arriving to the Plaza Hotel on the June 13th at 9:30 and
leaving hotel on June 16th at 7:15 a.m. to take the 8:30 flight.


B: How about 14th afternoon?


A: I am sorry, but I'm busy to have a trade show at 2:00p.m. I am available that's day night.


B: I'm afraid I can't make it then. I've dinner date.


A: That's too bad. Are you ok on 13th afternoon?


B: Unfortunately, I have flight leaves 8:40 a.m. for Garden City confer
ence and returning at 7:50 p.m. on 13th.


A: So when can you make it?


B: Could you tell me to your 15th schedule?


A: I'm free after a trade show in the morning.


B: I think we can meet at evening if it is ok with you.


A: That would be very nice. So we will see you on July 15th at evenin
g?


B: No! It's June 15th at evening.


A: Great! I will remember it, thanks!


B: I can' wait to see you, bye-bye .



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Update: Thanks for your help!

對我幫助很多!
感恩你的幫忙,
修改我的破英文.
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