Anonymous
Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我改寫信的作文20點

Their father also decides to let his children go. However, their father though his children are so little that they couldn’t take care of themselves, so he decided to go with them. Not only they can finish their dream, but also this experience will be unforgettable.

幫我挑出文法錯誤在哪?

如果可以的話

可以幫我改更好的鉅子

謝謝

Update:

感覺好像把我的拿去翻成中文

再次翻成英文

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Their father also decides to let his children go. The father decided to let his children go. But However, their father though his children are too young so little who that they couldn’t take a good care of themselves, so he decided to go with them. Not only they can finish their dream, but also this experience will be unforgettable. To make they dream come true and will have experience of an unforgettable memory.

    decide to = 通常都是用過去式, 因為你在說的時候已經決定了.你第二次的用法就對了.

    however = 當你用however後面要接完成與前敘事情或意見完全相反的是務才可.

    最後一句我不確定你要表達的真正意思, 但可確定的是 " 夢 " 是不能用 finish 的在英文裡只有 dream come true. 或許你可以改成 goal or target 決定與他們要做的事情來用字 eg: Then they can finish the goal / target together....

    整理如下:

    The father decided to let his children go. But though his children are too young who could not take a good care of themselves. So he gone with them to make dream come true and will have experince of an unforgettable memory.

    改的不是很好 提供參考

    你可以從新再整理過或許會好一點

  • 1 decade ago

    首先我要了解一下,這裡的小孩有2個或2個以上 請問一下這兩個小孩是同一個爸爸嗎?

    2008-09-29 22:30:36 補充:

    有沒有前後文順便給我一下!

    2008-09-29 23:08:06 補充:

    Their father allows his children to go. He decides to go with his children because he thinks that they are too little to take care of themselves. They can not only realize their dreams but also get an unforgettable experience.

    這裡是我幫你預設這兩個孩子是同一個爸爸的寫法~

  • 1 decade ago

    The father, thought that he the child is also small, is impossible to look after itself, their father decided that asks him the child to leave. Therefore he decided that supports them. Not only may complete their dream, moreover this experience will be unforgettable.

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