Anonymous asked in Family & RelationshipsOther - Family & Relationships · 1 decade ago

What do you think of my poem?

Same words came out of your mouth

Said your sorry, said youd change

All you did was change to something worse

Something more satanic then what you originally were.

It was my mistake

Its was my fault

To show you that I cared

Wasn’t worth it all.

I hope you enjoyed me

because I’m not here now

Proving I wasn’t one of those

Proving myself to you

Tied down in your head

Strangled in mine

Forgot my self worth

You stole my pride

Ill forgive, but Ill never forget

Forgiveness doesn’t mean I’m yours again

I seeked salvation for your sins

A beautiful being, treated like nothing.

Ill live a life without you now

and you’ll live a life without me

A loss for you, a lesson for me

7 Answers

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    You said that you will change but you did not

    I shall stop here

    because i am not going to wait for a change

    but i shall see regrets in you

    Once i've said that i will use my entire life to wait for you to change

    your changes will not benefit me but others who come along your life in the future

    It is not our faults

    but i would say it is a chance for us to be able to get together for that once only

    i am contented

    i am happy

    i did not waste any time for the sake of this small memories of ours

    You know that you are at fault

    but it is too late wanting a chance to be given again

    i hope that this regret

    you will rememeber me for your entire life

  • 1 decade ago

    Yes I like it and I can feel the pain in the words DO YOU HAVE MORE POEMS

  • 1 decade ago

    good job. really can feel your hatred toward someone in that. very vivid

  • 1 decade ago

    Beautiful.... sexy

    Are you a poet?

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  • 1 decade ago

    It is a really good poem.

  • 1 decade ago

    I loved it!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    its beautiful .......lovely

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