Ka Hei asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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Thrity minutes of physical exercise a day will keep ______

you fit...and there is no need you to go to a fitness room _______

or a sports center.Just doing some simple exercises _________

regular and you will feel better and healthier.Here _________

is some tips to make physical activity a part of your________

daily life._________

Try to exercise more in the office by do your________

own photocoping.________

Take a short walk to relax your after lunch.__________

Walk your pets after dinner,or do some household ______

chores like washing dishes,shopping the children. ______

Walk instead of travel by vehicle if is possible. For_____

example,get of the bus one stop earlier and walk to ____

your office.________

Take part on physical activities during holidays,__________

e.g. hiking,going for a picnic or cycle._______

Remember it is importance to maintain a healthy________

habits of regular exercise.Now get out of your chair and_______

starts walking! _______

NO LINE HAS MORE THAN ONE MISTAKE AND SOME LINES ARE CORRECT!!THX!!

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    Thrity (Thirty) minutes of physical exercise a day will keep ______

    you fit...and there is no need you(cross it out) to go to a fitness room _______

    or a sports center.Just doing some simple exercises _________(This line is OK!)

    regular(regularly) and you will feel better and healthier.Here _________

    is(are) some tips to make physical activity a part of your________

    daily life._________(This line is OK!)

    Try to exercise more in the office by do(doing) your________

    own photocoping(photocopying).________

    Take a short walk to relax your(yourself) after lunch.__________

    Walk your pets after dinner,or do some household ______(This line is OK!)

    chores like washing dishes,shopping (+with)the children. ______

    Walk instead of travel by vehicle if is(cross it out) possible. For_____

    example,get of the bus one stop earlier and walk to ____(This line is OK!)

    your office.________(This line is OK!)

    Take part on(in) physical activities during holidays,__________

    e.g. hiking,going for a picnic or cycle(cycling)._______

    Remember it is importance(important) to maintain a healthy________

    habits(habit) of regular exercise.Now get out of your chair and_______

    starts(start) walking! _______

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