幫我改幾個英文句子20點

Question

It's essential for children that they should learn how to use computer.

那個 that 後面的子句 這樣寫可以嗎?

As long as children sit in front of computer so that they could check e-mail, they sould not go to re ceive the letter from postmans.

寫的這麼長 這樣文法會不會怪怪的? 寫在作文上會不會扣分?

還有three month

的month 有沒有複數型?

Update:

還有

There are many vehicles for people to choice.

那個vehicle有複數嗎?用choice合理嗎?

Update 2:

那 colleague 有沒有複數型?

Update 3:

沒有閱讀的習慣--->翻成英文

還有

take part in, participate, attend

友什麼不同?

Answer 1

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It's essential for children that they should learn how to use computer.

那個 that 後面的子句 這樣寫可以嗎?

我覺得城鄉差距並不是每一個小孩都一定會電腦再加上經濟因素

所以用 essential 太強調, 如果您覺得要用就換下basic既可.

It is basic for children to learn how to use computer.

As long as children sit in front of computer so that they could check e-mail, they sould not go to re ceive the letter from postmans.

寫的這麼長 這樣文法會不會怪怪的? 寫在作文上會不會扣分?

As long as children use to email then they will not much chance to get the hand writing letter.

還有three months

的month 有沒有複數型? = months

There are many vehicles for people to choice.

那個vehicle有複數嗎?用choice合理嗎?

Good choice = adj n 選好了 to choose = V去選擇

不是很清楚 vehicles 您是不是要用交通工具 = transportation

大眾運輸交通工具 = public transportation

There are many vehicle's options for people to choose.

There are many public transportation options for people to choose.

我是根據您寫的句子去猜測您的意思

或許不是您要的

提供參考!!

Answer 2

第一個句子這樣寫可以 第二個句子該句號的就要應該加句號As long as children sit in front of computer.they..........

month沒有複數

vehicle有複數 用choice是合理的